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its great fanfic the only thing that could be better is how in the beginning the MC acts like young master that can't see mount Tai when he isnt even that strong And some gramaticall mistakes

my review is up to chapter 23so, overall a good read with relatively good English. the MC seems to be wildly chaotic and emotional, not necessarily a bad thing but sometimes feels like a bit much. That's my only real gripe, keep up the good work

Let's Gooooo!!!Riveria best Waifu in Danmachi!

The flame-grilled cat ribs with a little lemongrass and a sprinkling of sesame seeds finally arrived. As we gnawed away at the bones we agreed once again that the meat was magic. The fat, however, was very peculiar and best avoided. It’s difficult to say why, but I suspect that the fat tastes strange because the flavour is so apparently unfamiliar that it’s disconcerting – although you know you’re eating something new and different, the moment you can’t link the taste with something more familiar, it scares your palate.

YOOOOO!!! MORE EN VERSION PLEASE!!! Yes!!

Well, the MC has the appearance of the wizard king from Black Clover and has a proud and arrogant personality and will offend some people for relatively trivial things like simple insults directed at him, which is a bit annoying, but still, he is not the kind of evil protagonist who will chase and manipulate people all the time, he does not even look for a harem, which already makes him much better for me at least.The way the protagonist kills can be summed up with fire magic and the katana. So don't expect him to use ice, wind, earth, time and space spells or anything else to kill, at most he'll use some of them for support.He's still an OP character, but not an unstoppable one, he'll still bleed, faint, and lose from time to time.His "infinite mana" can best be described with the idea that his spells don't use mana from his mana pool when he uses them, but his mana pool isn't huge, so he needs to increase it to use more powerful spells, that's one of the reasons why he's not unstoppable but still OP, nice.Some fights are well described and even exciting, but unfortunately most are very rushed and just boil down to onomatopoeia or things like *crash* *dodge* *stab* and so on.Overall it's a good read, give it a try.

Sometimes MC become angry for no reason just like a Young master in cultivation world (well he was a Prince) but the story was good anyway

Quite good, it deserves love. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

AUTEUR pk tu traduit ton oeuvre perso j'ai utiliser la tradution auto et quand le prochain chapitre sur l'autre avec plus de 60 chapitre [img=recommander][img=gifle][img=gifle]