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its great fanfic the only thing that could be better is how in the beginning the MC acts like young master that can't see mount Tai when he isnt even that strong And some gramaticall mistakes

Let's Gooooo!!!Riveria best Waifu in Danmachi!

my review is up to chapter 23so, overall a good read with relatively good English. the MC seems to be wildly chaotic and emotional, not necessarily a bad thing but sometimes feels like a bit much. That's my only real gripe, keep up the good work

The flame-grilled cat ribs with a little lemongrass and a sprinkling of sesame seeds finally arrived. As we gnawed away at the bones we agreed once again that the meat was magic. The fat, however, was very peculiar and best avoided. It’s difficult to say why, but I suspect that the fat tastes strange because the flavour is so apparently unfamiliar that it’s disconcerting – although you know you’re eating something new and different, the moment you can’t link the taste with something more familiar, it scares your palate.

To make it clear, if you don't have any deep knowledge about Danmachi this is a decent read. If you do then you'll have to ignore most monster data of chapters that come after 70 something. The main character is kinda anoying sometimes and has an attitude like he owns the world, going around insulting anyone he doesn't like even if that would've gotten him killed if not for plot

writing quality:2 stars, He can spell the goddeses names right and He can't incorporate any resembles of the actual characters in the fanfic.For example Hestia would never call Bell son, yet here it's used every single time which is very out of character.The only character he got correct was Aiz and that's cause she doesn't talk lol.His spelling is bad and it creates confusion, hephaestus now goes by hephbasoas or some weird bumbo jumbo like that. story development: It's pretty mid.The usual "I go into the dungeon and grind with my system".3 stars cause I could not get far enough for a story development to occur. character design: This is the reason I couldn't get far enough in the fanfic.The main character is 20-21 and he acts like a child.He gets overly mad at being called boy for some odd reason and he also gets mad over being asked about his past.Mind you he doesn't even have a past cause he transmigrated into the body and the memories just intertwined. The character is a bit on the dumb side or things when it comes to emotional control as he let's every small thing pass him off.He went to a dwarf for a weapon he said "Mr.dwarf", the dwarf said "Yes, boy" and all of a sudden the Mc gets mad for being called boy and thinks about using 15 fire balls or whatever. by the way the infinite mana thing has a nerf.Big nerf.so yeah. skipping update stability world background is normal 3 stars.Nothing is off track from cannon so what can I even say?.He doesn't do anything note worthy besides steal a book but he gives it back the day after. over all 2.6 stars. This is not a harem and that's the only upside of this.Although he did have a one night stand with a goddess. Anyway I recommend not to read a waste of time if u hate edgy, emotionally unstable adults.

Well, the MC has the appearance of the wizard king from Black Clover and has a proud and arrogant personality and will offend some people for relatively trivial things like simple insults directed at him, which is a bit annoying, but still, he is not the kind of evil protagonist who will chase and manipulate people all the time, he does not even look for a harem, which already makes him much better for me at least.The way the protagonist kills can be summed up with fire magic and the katana. So don't expect him to use ice, wind, earth, time and space spells or anything else to kill, at most he'll use some of them for support.He's still an OP character, but not an unstoppable one, he'll still bleed, faint, and lose from time to time.His "infinite mana" can best be described with the idea that his spells don't use mana from his mana pool when he uses them, but his mana pool isn't huge, so he needs to increase it to use more powerful spells, that's one of the reasons why he's not unstoppable but still OP, nice.Some fights are well described and even exciting, but unfortunately most are very rushed and just boil down to onomatopoeia or things like *crash* *dodge* *stab* and so on.Overall it's a good read, give it a try.

YOOOOO!!! MORE EN VERSION PLEASE!!! Yes!!

Sometimes MC become angry for no reason just like a Young master in cultivation world (well he was a Prince) but the story was good anyway