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Theon_Bennit
Theon_BennitLv41yr
2023-11-16 05:14

my review is up to chapter 23so, overall a good read with relatively good English. the MC seems to be wildly chaotic and emotional, not necessarily a bad thing but sometimes feels like a bit much. That's my only real gripe, keep up the good work

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Jonny_Mad
Jonny_MadLv15

wildly chaotic is an euphemism my friend

RaccoonLeague
RaccoonLeagueAuthor

Thank you for the comment!

s_b8099
s_b8099Lv4

Can you tell me the mc personality please ? If he is good neutral or evil

RaccoonLeague:Thank you for the comment!
RaccoonLeague
RaccoonLeagueAuthor

He's chaotic, but he's not bad, he just starts fighting with anyone, some might say he's childish, a Chinese ramnce, but I want to cause a mess in Orario as much as I can with this MC.

s_b8099:Can you tell me the mc personality please ? If he is good neutral or evil
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