Theon_Bennit

i got 13 chapters in

Don't worry about it, it's a really solid start for a WN (trust me I've read over 1600 of them on here) and if not for the chat group really turning me away, I would definitely stick around. Keep up the good work man, I wish you the best!

First of all, this review will strictly be about the novel itself, ignoring stuff like paid chapters and Patreon. I'm caught up on chapters (chapter 123 at the time of writing this), and it's a top 3 fate fic for me. It is a translation, but it doesn't come off nearly as much as most others, and its readable. It's a fresh take on fate, with an MC with little to no personal power, but using his other skills to become a legend. The story mainly focusses on the MC, gods, and a small number of heroes. The mc's goal is to die the greatest legend of all, and it's pretty funny at some moments. The mc using Paintings, Music, and his own personality to earn the favor of many and it works. It's a new take that I really like and something I haven't seen before. it takes place in ancient Greece, and it makes use of lot a lot of different legends. Overall, would definitely give it a shot if it seems interesting.

I'm caught up (chapter 172 at the time of writing this), and overall, I would highly recommend it. It is a translation, but it's well done compared to others. The MC focusses on smithing with a secondary focus on personal strength. Three things (imo) make this novel a good one. The first and best reason is that the MC doesn't care about changing the plot and has already done so quite a bit. It's refreshing to see honestly. The second reason is that it doesn't take place in Konoha and actually tries to dive deep into the hidden mist and greater world overall. The third reason is that the MC feels relatively human in his actions and reactions, not like a super psychopath that randomly becomes a monster. I can actually understand him. Overall, would definitely recommend giving it a shot if it seems interesting.

For a Webnovel novel that's not MTL, the English is pretty solid and readable, and each chapter is about as long as others, but it's fine. The story seems a little boring but its early so not a big issue. It has a chat group which I really dislike but that my preference. Overall solid and if you don't mind chat groups I would recommend giving it a shot.

this book is gonna be the most terrifying noble phantasm in history

poor guy, its in his DNA

making the flames real is so much better