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KingRetto
KingRettoLv41yr
2023-12-09 15:29

you built the best background for the worst mc ,this mc is already dead he is saying he is not interested in banging chick because he gave up all leisure of life before dying in his last life and when system say if dont complete the task he will die this dimwit of mc got scared , if you are not interested and already give up on life then just go and die instead of him i think system guide would be a better mc , or a mc who wants to be strongest while banging chick that would be a perfect mc all i can say author you made the best world background with magic , adventres and whole which can be a place for an academy arc afterwards but because of mc i am droping it at ch 17 atleast make make an mc that take advsntage of world he is in or smart mc or even an dadptable mc would have been fine 💢 😡 💢

Lust System: Monster girl Harem

Crimson_Blue
4.2
313 Chs

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Crimson_Blue
Crimson_BlueAuthor

Before giving a review maybe you should have read more than 17 chapters, I'll admit I did make the mc a little dumb at first since this is my first time writing harem, but it gets really better, the mc is now making better decisions and taking full advantage of his system and the world he's in, so maybe you should read all the free chapters before deciding to drop or not, but thanks for the review.

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Phaeron
PhaeronLv3

its like saying read 90% then it will get better. WHY SHOULD I WASTE MY TIME TO READ 90%

Crimson_Blue:Before giving a review maybe you should have read more than 17 chapters, I'll admit I did make the mc a little dumb at first since this is my first time writing harem, but it gets really better, the mc is now making better decisions and taking full advantage of his system and the world he's in, so maybe you should read all the free chapters before deciding to drop or not, but thanks for the review.
1yr
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Crimson_Blue
Crimson_BlueAuthor

No, what I meant what that, you should read all the free chapters, then if you don't like the book, don't pay for the chapters, it's that simple.

Phaeron:its like saying read 90% then it will get better. WHY SHOULD I WASTE MY TIME TO READ 90%
1yr
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Crimson_Blue
Crimson_BlueAuthor

No, what I meant what that, you should read all the free chapters, then if you don't like the book, don't pay for the chapters, it's that simple.

Phaeron:its like saying read 90% then it will get better. WHY SHOULD I WASTE MY TIME TO READ 90%
1yr
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Sam0207
Sam0207Lv4

The readers will NEVER be completely happy no matter what. Take the really constructive criticism and ignore the rest. It's just demotivating and emotionally draining.

Crimson_Blue:No, what I meant what that, you should read all the free chapters, then if you don't like the book, don't pay for the chapters, it's that simple.
1yr
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Crimson_Blue
Crimson_BlueAuthor

That's the job 😌😌

Sam0207:The readers will NEVER be completely happy no matter what. Take the really constructive criticism and ignore the rest. It's just demotivating and emotionally draining.
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Brandon_Haddan
Brandon_HaddanLv13

I been trying to find the Discord but I guess I'm to Dumb.

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Crimson_Blue
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Hello to all my cultured reader, welcome to my book, I won't dive into details so see for yourself, and if you have questions ask me under this review and I'm happy to answer.

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Ceven
CevenLv1

A good start with a pretty good plot, with good 'plot', the relationship between the system and Mc is annoying at first but it grows on you, but other than that no complaints currently

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Doccc
DocccLv13

I absolutely love this novel I hope it gets more updates and I would definitely recommend this to anyone that wants spicy story with very intriguing yet simple plot.

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loidentity
loidentityLv15

Horribly dumb MC for no apparent reason, supported by a system who is somehow even dumber. Just don't understand how the story benefits from the author making them that dumb.

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SpeedyED
SpeedyEDLv5

The MC is annoying at the start, but it gets better later on. THE BIGGEST PROBLEM of this novel is the author's obsession with girls' backdoors. 90% is him using only backdoors and finishing in them too. That ruins everything for me.

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Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

Looks like I found your second book 😁. Same settings without yuri and some hope for winc est?

1yr
Ddsdd
DdsddLv3

its called monster girl harem, but there are only demi-human and humanoid girls. there is no lamia, mermaids, orc girls, centaur girls, harpy girls, those are true monster girls

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Kyoma_6084
Kyoma_6084Lv1

I read few chapters but I'm going to drop this, In the introduction he says that the MC is handsome, the most popular, he can get as many girls as he wants, But when he has to put the junior to work and he doesn't die he becomes an isekai MC who is ashamed everything and he looks like a desperate virgin. He has no idea what to do with the system and honestly it's a waste for him to have a system since after 4 months of playing he doesn't know the basics of an RPG.

1yr
Daoist_CloudySky
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I am loving it very much keep the updates rolling👍🙂

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