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Br4tsch
Br4tschLv149mth
2024-02-05 03:43

I dont get it why so many are rating this ff so high. This Story is more like a diary and not a novel.

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aceZ0
aceZ0Lv4

They're probably in vibes with the edgy tone of this novel in other words

Egyanimefan
EgyanimefanLv1

It's only in the first few chapters... That's why you have to read 10+ chapters first to review a story.

Darwin111111
Darwin111111Lv4

Sometimes you come from a long list of novel failures

Egyanimefan:It's only in the first few chapters... That's why you have to read 10+ chapters first to review a story.
yiyo_XD
yiyo_XDLv2

Por que no te pones a escribir una novela vos ?, de tanto criticar , se nota que no tenes para escribir

mow
mowLv4

Y porque uno tiene que escribir una novela para poder criticar? no tiene sentido tu oración

yiyo_XD:Por que no te pones a escribir una novela vos ?, de tanto criticar , se nota que no tenes para escribir
Enormiity
EnormiityLv4

This is generally correct; wait for one arc before conducting a deep review. However, a simple review like this is better than a random 5-star review without any actual 'review.' If chapters 10+ are 'good,' the author should rewrite the first 9 chapters, as most people will decide whether to commit to the story or not based on the prologue. For example, I don't read this story past Chapter 1 since it's so bad.

Egyanimefan:It's only in the first few chapters... That's why you have to read 10+ chapters first to review a story.
Br4tsch
Br4tschLv14

I do now its just the beginning so keep going at least till Chap 10

Anjotrix
AnjotrixLv10

Where does he abruptly change personality? that makes sense

Egyanimefan:It's only in the first few chapters... That's why you have to read 10+ chapters first to review a story.
mystery_anonymous
mystery_anonymousLv3

please read my new novel "The end of world has not yet begun, the system is activated in advance"

Dextrode
DextrodeLv3

What kind of brain rot is required to not be able to read 5 chapsters. (Which is the extent of the ‘storytelling’ section)? Go read some Dr.Seus if that is so difficult for your feeble brain.

hasan_foraty
hasan_foratyLv12

only the first 10 chapter ant that's because MC is narrating the story of his like until this moment

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