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Neil_AdsAuthor1yr
2023-12-24 03:10

Self review after 150+ chapters of writing this novel. Ofc, allow me to shamelessly rate it 5 stars without stating the reason why just like the other shameless authors out there. If you have any questions, you can ask in this review and I'll reply to the best of my abilities. First and foremost, I'll be blunt and tell you honestly that I have planned to there be a yuri at the very end of this story. The Yuri that I meant here is not explicit. It will only be mentioned and that was it, as it did not have a major relation to the plot. It is such a big world so it would only be natural that other people would surely have this kind of relationship. This is what I meant when I said that it has Yuri. However, since a lot complained about it, I decided to scrap this idea and just settle in a world that has no Yuri. It has no major part on the plot anyway and was only there to spice things up. Next. Yes, for the last time, this is harem. The harem won't grow explosively as I wanted the MC to slowly develop his relationship with his girls until they reach that point of their relationship. There will be smaut, but as I am still currently learning this Dao path, please allow me to make mistake and improve as I write. I always read all your comments but please be informed that I wont be able to reply all of them. If you have some questions, you can ask here. If you don't have any, then why are you still here? Go and read!

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Neil_AdsAuthor

P.S: There will only be smaut scenes if the mc is involve. Ntr lovers can go away and scram! There won't be any in this novel.

That_Annoying_guyLv4

How many is in the harem?

Neil_Ads:P.S: There will only be smaut scenes if the mc is involve. Ntr lovers can go away and scram! There won't be any in this novel.
Neil_AdsAuthor

Many

That_Annoying_guy:How many is in the harem?
That_Annoying_guyLv4

Neil_Ads:Many
DaoistArboreLv14

A bit sad that you scrapped the yuri mostly; men that are afraid of women being attracted to another would be better off taking a long journey off a short cliff Its more realistic than having women cosplay as dolls that are incapable of finding an interest in their sister-wife

FjdjjfjsjiwosLv3

Indeed, you and your supporters, who have not yet grown up and consider the relationship between a girl and a girl in a harem realistic, should go on such a journey. There is nothing normal about a person being attracted to their gender, no matter if it's a man or a woman, it's still not normal. This is a very serious disorder in the brain of people with a non-traditional orientation. You also have a very serious brain disorder, I feel sorry for your parents, they raised a mor0n. And yes, I had a relationship with two women during my student years, and actually such polyamory is not fun at all.

DaoistArbore:A bit sad that you scrapped the yuri mostly; men that are afraid of women being attracted to another would be better off taking a long journey off a short cliff Its more realistic than having women cosplay as dolls that are incapable of finding an interest in their sister-wife
TroxkingLv15

I wanted to ask if for the harem, will it just be his contracted beasts, or would you include other people?

Neil_AdsAuthor

Yes, not just contracted beast.

Troxking:I wanted to ask if for the harem, will it just be his contracted beasts, or would you include other people?
ZessDragneelLv13

Hi there, just had one question will he remain dedicated to his harem or will there also be flings?

Neil_Ads:Yes, not just contracted beast.
Ross_VeilletteLv15

I mean, with the size of these harems there realistically would be Yuri. At the very minimum during the orgies. Only the Primordial Divine Chaos Incubus Dragon can prevent yuri.

DaoistArbore:A bit sad that you scrapped the yuri mostly; men that are afraid of women being attracted to another would be better off taking a long journey off a short cliff Its more realistic than having women cosplay as dolls that are incapable of finding an interest in their sister-wife
Test_MiscLv4

I think you misunderstood something , the "no yuri" that most people might have said could be read as " no yuri in the MC's harem". so I don't think there is any problem with there being yuri outside it.

FjdjjfjsjiwosLv3

If you didn’t know, then open the Internet and read what scientists write about the fact that same-s@x attraction is a disorder of the brain, and that along with it these people also suffer from other mental illnesses. As for the account, I have a second one on which I spend money. But just in case, I don’t leave comments on it. And yes, I am still a homophobe. I don't see any problem in this.

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TroxkingLv15

I have no interest in reading about quack “doctors” and their made up science. Just as I imagine you have no interest in reading about actual science. There can be no discourse with someone who hates so much, so all I can say is enjoy your sad life and maybe, if you were to experience such hate towards yourself, your opinion may change.

Fjdjjfjsjiwos:If you didn’t know, then open the Internet and read what scientists write about the fact that same-s@x attraction is a disorder of the brain, and that along with it these people also suffer from other mental illnesses. As for the account, I have a second one on which I spend money. But just in case, I don’t leave comments on it. And yes, I am still a homophobe. I don't see any problem in this.
FjdjjfjsjiwosLv3

Hmm, you all seem to be the same. I hope your children will become gay and you will experience all this on your own skin, although it probably won’t matter to you. And where did you get the idea that these scientists are charlatans, and those who write about the normality of homosexuality are right? Hmm, you all seem to be the same. I hope your children will become gay and you will experience all this on your own skin, although it probably won’t matter to you. And where did you get the idea that these scientists are charlatans, and those who write about the normality of homosexuality are right. Previously, back in the second half of the 20th century, famous Western scientists wrote about the benefits of cigarettes, but now think about why they did this. Unless, of course, people like you are able to think with your own head. Tolerance for gays is garbage. Although you may be gay yourself, only this can explain your position.

Troxking:I have no interest in reading about quack “doctors” and their made up science. Just as I imagine you have no interest in reading about actual science. There can be no discourse with someone who hates so much, so all I can say is enjoy your sad life and maybe, if you were to experience such hate towards yourself, your opinion may change.
TroxkingLv15

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Fjdjjfjsjiwos:Hmm, you all seem to be the same. I hope your children will become gay and you will experience all this on your own skin, although it probably won’t matter to you. And where did you get the idea that these scientists are charlatans, and those who write about the normality of homosexuality are right? Hmm, you all seem to be the same. I hope your children will become gay and you will experience all this on your own skin, although it probably won’t matter to you. And where did you get the idea that these scientists are charlatans, and those who write about the normality of homosexuality are right. Previously, back in the second half of the 20th century, famous Western scientists wrote about the benefits of cigarettes, but now think about why they did this. Unless, of course, people like you are able to think with your own head. Tolerance for gays is garbage. Although you may be gay yourself, only this can explain your position.
KacbReLv10

no no, I don't like pure yuri relationships in a story, I just want the MC to destroy that yuri relationship with him lightsaber.

Test_Misc:I think you misunderstood something , the "no yuri" that most people might have said could be read as " no yuri in the MC's harem". so I don't think there is any problem with there being yuri outside it.
Abs_07Lv11

With the harem

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