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2024-01-14 03:19

this author is an enemy of logic and a lot by the way he explains things. the start with unnecessary deity plot was very boring. the idea of mc not knowing plot could not live even a few chapters, cause this idiot forgot his own setup and started making mc "recalling comics and movies". not giving plot knowledge is a big "no" in a book of every decent fanfic author, cause without it there is no reason for a novel to be a fanfic

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I agree with all points except the last one. Because plot knowledge is not all there is for something to become a fanfic. Although with the way you describe the setup, the fic seems very cliche and poor quality. People like MisterImmortal have proven that you don't need prior knowledge of a plot in order for the fanfic to actually have a point in existing.

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