Review Detail of Tim_QQQ in The Originals: I am the strongest after a thousand years {Rewrite}

The writing is near unreadable but its a little confusing as to why.. normally its pretty easy to see if a novel is just an MTL or written by someone whose English is very poor.. but this novel is like the baby of both. the writing is horrendous in a way ive never seen before. i got to chapter 3 or 4 but its really not worth going into.. it needs heavily editing and at that point you would just be writing a new story.