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Little_El
Little_ElLv31yr
2023-10-14 17:31

He's... Silent. This is what really ruined the story. This is someone who has just been released into a new world, nervous and panicked, he should have had some outside monologue. He has no charm, it's supposed to be a streaming and his conversation with Red is bland, she just asks him questions. He doesn't take any initiative, he should have been nervous and therefore talk about what he sees, discussing conspiracy theories out loud. Frankly, there are a lot of streamers. 10 minutes on YouTube and the author would have the best and best streamer in the world. It's a shame.

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Cha_D_Bear
Cha_D_BearLv4

stupid ≠ not showing emotions

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Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3

fr

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Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3

bro is telling the author to make the mc seem like a naive fool.. dont listen to him.

UnderChain
UnderChainLv11

Thanks for the comment, I hate MCs who do all these things like a stupid character, so I'm going to give this story a chance

Sky_TheEnder132
Sky_TheEnder132Lv14

ik what you feels. but bro, it starting to get better! A LOT BETTER that this fic become a masterpiece on it's own.

GrimReeFer
GrimReeFerLv1

"nervous and panicked" and you want him outwardly shouting about his emotions like some annoying YouTube streamer? 😂

Jorah26252
Jorah26252Lv4

Do you not know what naive means? How is showing emotions naive?

Monarch_Lord:bro is telling the author to make the mc seem like a naive fool.. dont listen to him.
SirWoof
SirWoofLv4

so he's a Robot Super duper Really Smart Sociopathic MC? Thanks for the Warning it's getting Tiring reading this types, Holy moly QQ NSFW has more More relatable character than Webnovel.

MakarHunt
MakarHuntLv4

Not really actually As someone who’s fully caught up he isn’t like that at all tbh

SirWoof:so he's a Robot Super duper Really Smart Sociopathic MC? Thanks for the Warning it's getting Tiring reading this types, Holy moly QQ NSFW has more More relatable character than Webnovel.
Absurd_Idiot
Absurd_IdiotLv1

Not at all actually

SirWoof:so he's a Robot Super duper Really Smart Sociopathic MC? Thanks for the Warning it's getting Tiring reading this types, Holy moly QQ NSFW has more More relatable character than Webnovel.
Original_Eternal
Original_EternalLv1

no it's easy to misunderstand but bro is saying that mc should give a commentary for everything since he's a streamer but it won't be necessary since the thing he's gonna stream is a bit too overwhelming so even without streaming skills mc should be fine

Monarch_Lord:bro is telling the author to make the mc seem like a naive fool.. dont listen to him.
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