Well the writing is excellent but if you’re writing about the second ninja war then nawaki’s death doesn’t make sense….. seems incorrect… I believe Dan and Nawaki die nearing the end of the second ninja war… so im confused about the timeline.
DesMark
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LIKECheck this out: https://www.webnovel.com/book/naruto-timeline-guide-%5Bupdated%5D_20145550005054605/konoha-timeline-ages-of-konoha-ninjas-(jiraiya's-disciples)_73087488624752147
DesMark:There are a lot of different answers from Google, but I found the clip of him dying, and after that Orochimaru brings Hashirama's necklace to her and he thought about finding her platoon. That means it must be during the war otherwise there won't be platoons...
I hope nawaki livs many fanfics leave important world changing events the exact same to make writing easier, but that also reduces how interesting the world is
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dude even a random Google search tells that nawaki died in second war in the same year as dan, where did find it saying 6 years before war
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The 2nd shinobi war started 52 years after Konoha founded and Nawaki died 42 years after Konoha founded. - Found from Google
cereal_fisher_1194:dude even a random Google search tells that nawaki died in second war in the same year as dan, where did find it saying 6 years before war
I couldn't agree more, as if seeing a happy Tsunade who doesn't fall into alcoholism and has children wouldn't be a beautiful thing. As if the disappearance of the senju clan is something no one seems to want to reverse. It's sad and so redundant
DaoistRGOoG6:I hope nawaki livs many fanfics leave important world changing events the exact same to make writing easier, but that also reduces how interesting the world is