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FantasyTrollLv141yr
2024-01-07 22:56

An honest review from a new reader. Writing quality is great apart from a few common typos/grammar issues. I, for one, am not a fan of slow paced stories (which I feel is this), but I do think it develops well in the time it does move. So far, characters seem to be designed well. However, I do think they are a bit bland. Updating stability from what I am seeing is great as well. World background 5 stars, this is fanfiction, and there are resources to draw from, but it is still presented and introduced well. 4.2

Overlord: The Path of Sin

AzazelGrim
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46 Chs

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I hope this won't be dropped before the new world like almost all of them are

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A Big Disapointment by ch 33 the MC became a Trap the world items makes No Sense and the fanfic is going to be eh dropped Like His old fanfic's👎🤢

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For fanfiction, this is already good. I expected the chapters to be long.Even though I don't have much hope for the novel, what's wrong with hoping?

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Great book, totally not doing this for the [Author’s eternal vow of love] skill.

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I'm giving this review to get the skill author promised "Authors eternal vow of love". Jokes aside, for the little I've currently read, it's quite good, I'm adding this story on my special reading list.

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One of the best Overlord fanfics I have read so far in this app- the story progression is crazy good- Can't wait to read more chapters 🤠

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