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Equilibrium123Lv41yr
2023-10-01 07:53

Good story with a unique start. I especially liked that the mc embraced her new identity and how her being an angel effects others reactions. However the author needs to explain the nerfs and buffs the main character and villains are getting. There are a lot of times me and other readers were confused for a lot of the fights because the mc would beat up villains a few chapters before with no effort only to struggle against someone they shouldn’t. For example either Voldemort was buffed and we weren’t told or there is some confusion on the authors part when it comes to DXD angels or HP wizards and their power levels and how they would face against each other, never-mind an angel with a gamer system. Now this could be explained by the author in a few ways one such way would be to reason that hp wizards are stronger because they had to face other wizards and marvel threats that normal HP wizards wouldn’t, However this story lacks that and would be much better with it. Still for a webnovel fanfic this is good quality with no grammer mistakes and a female mc, that is rare. I just wish the author would explain or respond to the confusion of the readers (also ps hope you dont make this mc yuri only as most other stories do it because they are genderbender fics and it would be refreshing to see a non yuri exclusive female mc)

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SadarsaLv4

(also ps hope you dont make this mc yuri only as most other stories do it because they are genderbender fics and it would be refreshing to see a non yuri exclusive female mc) ^^This. The synopsis looked interesting and i was about to start reading, but i saw that Yuri tag and decided not to. I don't mind the occasional Yuri story, but holy hell... Other than the CEO romance crap, i don't think there's any non-Yuri female leads on this site. It's telling of how pathetic the vast majority of authors are on this site.

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