The writing quality is great, nothing a newbie like me can provide an opinion for. I know you said you'll do weekly updates and I'm really exited to see what happens next. The story is developing nicely, I like how you handled the father situation. It added an extra layer to the characters that I really enjoyed. I hope you can do more with Eli, his relationship with John hasn't been explored much now that they are teenagers. I don't remember if you had an pictures for the characters, but the cover art is really cool and I'm assuming that's the main character. The world background is done really well, I personally do not like to research much when writing a story as I feel like that ruins the fun for me a little bit. But I can appreciate it when you can tell that an author knows what they are talking about. Especially with the complicated history of America's independence.

there is only one problem with this story there isn't enough

This novel is looking promising. MC is not an a...hole with supper ego or OP and shows emotions beside happiness.Please, if it is possible, and not too time-consuming. Add some pictures as a comment.

Great book author at first I didn’t think it would be this good I the way the character interact with each other. Also the unique business ideas that you come up with

Love the story very interesting concept wish you all the luck in keeping the quality of the novel consistent

So far, so good! The story so far is not too shabby. Maybe elaborate more on daily life or slice of life elements, but also add little more worldbuilding and background. Overall I genuinely like it. Keep going and continue the work, you’re doing great!👍👍😀😀😄

this is really good but sometimes there's ome or two cringe worthy moments... but don't be discouraged this novel has great potential

Great story, hope you keep it going for many many more chapters!

I think that's a great original story. It might be a good idea to create a compromise, between the colonies and England, similar to how Ireland got its independance. Some historians say the lack of communication let to the war, but with a moderate negotiator such as John, they might come to an agreement.

Good