disappointed with story:- money system plot is nothing new. I was hoping for good story.
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This is a very nice novel to read. I'm just hoping he'll get to live and enjoy his life to the fullest not because it's prompted by the system like going to jiangbei or something but because he wanted to enjoy his newfound wealth, strength, and life.
I picked this novel up after I read the authors other book All of Creation, which I really didn’t enjoy. The author suggested I try his other novels and I found this one which I have come to like. After 40 chapters, im still reading on. For the most, the updating is rather good, I tend to read chapters after about 4 or so accumulate to get a good chunk, the downside is I sometimes have to flip back a chapter or two to recall events. I feel the only downside is that everything seems way to easy at the moment, rewards seem to be raining down all the time and all of them are pretty good. I believe to offset this is to throw a few lemons in the mix so it is always a surprise and not the expected. Ezmode begins to lose flavour after abit, but in this case I do like the genre of Urban and systems and it is keeping me rather amused to read further and to throw stones and coin to unlock further chapters. Oh another thing I am in two minds about is his desire to always be in control. Mind you it isnt a bad thing at all, only being in control allows one to develop more, however with relationships, there should be a balance. An example was his attitude to continually draw the system lottery just to get another AI, just to put his first AI in her place, I felt this was rather childish and petulant. Still it is early days and perhaps the MC will grow in maturity further. Overall this book is worth taking a look at and to add to the readers library.
Starting was great but then the MC suddenly wants to Improve the technology of the Whole World (which i honestly don't know why)........Is he being a Saint or what?? And then he just goes around doing all the mundane things and wasting time, seriously at this point it feels like the author doesn't know what the story should be, so just let him revolutionize the whole world...This guy couldn't even complete 3 simple missions so far.
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A good story as of chapter 39. It seems to lack transitions from chapter to chapter so if you don’t remember the story well then you may have to go back to review previous chapters to understand what is going on. The updating has been mostly consistent with the author only missing a day here and there, usually you will get 1 chapter each day though and if not the following day they have released 2 to 3 chapters. I’ve been enjoying the read so far, I would suggest the author try writing 2 chapters every day even if you’re not posting them, you can schedule them to post in advance and build up a stockpile of chapters so that if you miss a day of writing you don’t have a day where nothing gets released.. this could also help with releasing bonus chapters in the future as it wouldn’t put a strain on you trying to write even more chapters to get the bonus chapters out.
The world seems interesting enough, and there is a solid through-line of depth and worldbuilding consistency.My issue arises in that by chapter 30, there are no obvious problems that can't be solved inherently. To an obsured level of wish-fufillment. The system takes this to something akin to a Slice of Life novel with no real sense of pacing or scale.
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this has been a pretty intersting read ive ben enjoying it alot
overall very nice serie and i love watching it
Over ten years ago, a Bitcoin was priced at $0.008. Today, it is priced at nearly $100,000! It is a fantasy we've all played in our heads. What if we could go back with all the knowledge we have now and invest in some Bitcoins, perhaps in many Bitcoins? Well this is your chance to live that fantasy through Darren Steele, our MC who suffers a soul shattering betrayal in the hands of his girlfriend and her millionaire father. After a sudden death, he regresses ten years to the past with all his knowledge retained and with the Investor System to guide him. [Ding!] [Weekly Quest: Make your first investment!] What! Darren can invest in Bitcoin?! Huh?! The price of one Bitcoin is only $0.08! Since he knows when Bitcoin is going to rise and when it will crash, does that mean he can avoid loss and only make PROFITS?! Indeed! With the Investor System, Darren Steele is going to build his way up the business world as a young investor. Bitcoin will make him a billionaire and he will defeat all his rivals and take down the companies of everyone who once treated him like trash!
Rick hardly had any hope to find a girlfriend. There were swarms of beautiful women around him, but no one was actually interested in a dull, boy like him. They didn't even pay attention to his existence. But everything changed when he was handed over a rod. Yes, a metal rod. Carrying that metal rod he had hardly taken a few steps when he was struck by lightening. As he lost consciousness, Rick wanted to beat the shit out of bloody bastard who gave him that rod, but when he woke up, he had a surprise waiting. He got a system which would help him get girls and make him stronger. Read my other story: The Devil's Harem (200+ chapters) [Discord: https://discord.gg/thWfhRdpqy]
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A brand new masterpiece by the author of "Unscientific Beast Taming"!!! The best fantasy novels in China in 2023! The invasion of creatures from different time and space gave birth to the "Beast Master" profession, and the protagonist was selected by a mysterious "black card", indicating that he has the qualification of a Beast Master and can contract to control pets to fight for himself! "Who could become the undisputed King of Beast Trainers in the brand-new Beast Training Era?" Royal Beast+Online Gaming+Spiritual Energy Recovery+Secret Realm
A 30-year-old Chinese NEET is reincarnated into the body of an otaku that choked to death on instant noodles. As he comes to grips with his new life, he realizes that this world is subtly different from Earth. The denizens of this world are far better looking, and this new world also possesses futuristic technology as well as mysterious Yin Yang masters! After reincarnating, he realized that he was endowed with a miraculous game-like system, which enables him to increase his own stats and transcend the limits of the human body. This system even has a game-breaking ability to save and load in real life! In this new world that’s akin to a 2-D game, he just wants to enjoy life and head for a glorious future... However, he is quickly embroiled in a complex plot. Can he unlock his true potential and utilize his system to break the shackles that confine him and discover the truth about his previous body’s circumstances? Note: This novel have an open ending with multiple possibilities, all fans are welcome to imagine an ending together.
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