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2024-02-03 01:51

This fanfic carries the theme of shop-like fanfic where the MC is a store owner who secretly kinda op or has something behind the scene that makes him different from a typical store owner. I like this type of troupe, especially when the MC possesses more than one identity, a room to make some interesting anime or manga reference. Another good thing to note down is the interaction between characters. Fanfic main point is the interaction between OC/MC with the original characters of the story. Many fanfic made mistakes of adding unnecessary OC(original character) that isn't really attractive or even counterproductive to the reason why people read fanfic in the first place. In the case of this fanfic, the author nailed it perfectly, especially the fact that the MC has more than one identity, making the author have capabilities to create more than one OC in the form of MC itself. you don't need unnecessary background OC side character to move the plot, the MC itself is the WHOLE plot. in summary, I really recommend reading this fanfic and give it a try!!!!

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