CornyChiWAH

I think there are too many long running paragraphs in this story. Maybe try to make it more shorter and concise?

How does a pervert win you a duel? by being the most perverted person in existence of course!!!! after all boob goddess exists!!! (DxD logic probably) 🤣

if it's fate series Alaya would be overjoyed to help you in our star journey. Gaia otherwise..... would probably hate you to the bone 🤣

ah yes, she's pretty hot ngl. (then again all DXD heroines are hot lmao)

there's nothing more scary than a competent pervert

Muricaaaaa lol

still viable strategy tho. me love hitting myself to wall

something probably doesn't add up from the start.....

bro working fast

plastic surgery can also help you in a spy situation.....