The quality dipped very quickly. Initially the plot revolved around the main character's revenge. I mean, that's one of the reason, he went through that regression bs along with the heroines in the first place. Ir, author even gave a sidenote that the heroines will suffer and beg the MC for forgiveness. He even committed that MC would not forgive them. But, nothing of sort happened except for one in the initial phase and I couldn't even count that as a form of retribution or revenge. As for others, well it was meh. Later, the revenge plo gets completely abandoned on a whim and the author decided to create a whole new plot for some reason. Author seems to think that he is some sort of mystery writer weaving some complex story stating everything will be resolved in the later part of the story. But, he doesn't seem to realize that if you want to create a complex story, you need to gradually progress the plot. That's why stories have different arcs for progression and foreshadowing. You can't just thrust one thing on another, thinking it would add depth to the story. The pacing of the story is quite horrendous. Sometimes, it is very slow and all of a sudden it becomes too fast. This inconsistency persists throughout the story. Also, author has complicated the story too much within just a hundred chapters. I guess the aim is to keep the readers intrigued or something along the line. But, I just became bored and irritated. Still, it was worth a read for like 60 chapters.
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