Very good novel. Really enjoying it. 💕 Unlike author's another novel (fat villain) where the starting was a bit too fast paced, the pacing in this one is just right.Pretty much all characters have a backstory which is really good. But apparently most of the heroines seem to have been rendered brainless by the protagonist halo, which is bland in my opinion. You can craft unique motivations of each heroine behind their betrayal to the mc and the reason they support the protagonist.Also coming to the part about not forgiving them, I would prefer they come under mc after suffering enough. Because they are beauties, why waste them, they should be used for bed warming. But please don't ever let them rejoin the protagonist, that would feel like ntr.Last but not least please don't drop and release more chapters 🙏
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Thank you Reader, To tell you the truth, My contracted novel was written fast paced as I wrote it due to frustration caused by this novel's previous failure, After writing for a month, I come to know my weak points and finally started this story again, (fat villain) got contracted making it hard for me to re edit it but whatever, I am not dropping any of my novel, Yes, It's only a month, I joined writing, I am still improving and only hope reader will always guide me whenever I do mistakes in some chapters, Thank you for 5-stars
I will keep your suggestions, and will definitely think of applying them, and about heroines reasons Except Olivia and Jenny, everyone have reasons, Olivia was his step-sister,So, I can't form much from it, and Jenny was a mere slave, yes she has a story and will in future prove to be a good plot, Even Alia has reasons and I will keep your suggestions in check while moving forward
I really like both of your novels 😍. haven't read Villains Vengeance because of lack of updates. Will definitely give it a try if you continue it. And lastly
Bed warming was wild chill OG
