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Olapet_n
Olapet_nLv129d
2024-12-08 16:49

As much as the story line is an interesting one,the writer made it difficult for the readers to comprehend. The writer kept mixing up the names of the characters and this made reading the story tiresome.

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Deutsche Unforgotten
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evilselkie
evilselkieLv14

Writer can't keep track of character names and keeps randomly changing them. Cliche, cardboard characters and a plot that makes no sense.

1yr

Range_R_adical
Range_R_adicalLv3

It's a lovely book. I love how Elizabeth's pride gets shattered continuously. Not to mention the mysteries shrouding the ML and FL. And I am looking forward to the chapter where Trevor finds out the hacker he wants is actually Viola.It's a GREAT story. P.S There are some character switching.

1yr
C_M_5263
C_M_5263Lv14

Nice story with some confusion over pronounce such as he/she due to translation, and Olga for Viola. Why Emma = Elizabeth when that is not the shorten version for the formal name? I can see some nice face-slapping coming up for the narcissistic foster family. Unfortunate that the ml lead smokes and drinks, which habit I detest.

1yr
Renata_Rezende_4787
Renata_Rezende_4787Lv4

the same plot as always. And without an editor, which makes reading difficult. Western names don't suit this type of story😤

1yr
mfoxxie_123
mfoxxie_123Lv13

I rrally dont like how theynput down people from the country it's unbevomming

1yr
Sloezie
SloezieLv13

I am super annoyed with the naming! Keep the original name, stop mixing the names!

1yr
OneFellSwoop
OneFellSwoopLv15

Not great, characters are one-dimensional and the plot is too convoluted and unconvincing, but an okay time waster. Too bad the translation is so flawed and the character names keep changing and being misapplied.

1yr
Irisia913
Irisia913Lv15

Reveal spoiler

1yr
jhayb_Agam
jhayb_AgamLv1

This is a lot of lovely book. It helps me enjoy my day to day activities. And I love this kind of story. Although the translation is not that good but it is understandable.

6mth
Solenneves
SolennevesLv15

C’est une belle histoire le flux reste stable mais les noms des personnages dans certains chapitre sont un embrouilles et cela devient un peu dur à suivre mais dans l.ensemble je kiffe la complexité de Rachel (limite skysophrene) et la clairvoyance et générosité de viola. Dommage quand même que Rachel soit si perdu. Bon roman et merci à l’auteur : Keep the good job [img=recommend]

7mth
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