Item: Substitute Marriage: Reborn As The Top Big-Shot
Rating: 3.6
Author: Irisia913

Irisia913Lv151yr

2023-11-28 08:24

The story is good, but way too slow-paced for me. We learn about her real family around the 80th chapter but they doesn't realize until chapters 280 . Also, there is A LOT of name and gender faults, it probably happened in the translation process, sometimes i had to read the sentences 2 times to understand who is the "real" person talking. The main character is well-developped, but some of the casual villains are too similar to each other, both in attitude and tactics (ex: Sylvia and Emma) and it makes them seem under-developped compared to the MC. The world background is quite complete and the story is overall well written, if we look over the translation errors we can see the author have talent in story writing.

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