The story have a lot of potential it's all depends of the author. The characters specialy the mc have funny personalitie. the original mc its kinda annoying (this is my point of view from personalitie) and how i imagen the mc Lucas

I feel like the author writes this story more on a whim, without much coherent thought behind it. It feels like he just tosses a bunch of information at you at the start of the novel, and then goes off and writes random plot twists dependent on his mood. Characters just perform actions outside of their explained personality, which personally i don't consider character development,character derailment maybe. Way too much time is also spent on random scuffles not really relevant to the story, being labelled as main scenarios, but could honestly be reduced to a chapter or 2 and nothing would change. I think the more egregious thing however is the author biting off more than he can chew. He spends several chapters building up this world based on a potentially predetermined story, and without the readers even knowing much about it, he sets about changing everything. I frankly don't understand setting up this world around certain characters to just add more supposedly, spicing up the novel however I just find it confusing. It's similar to wearing a full suit then just putting on a pair of pink underwear over it for flare, unnecessary. I think trying to add surprising elements to the Mc's background is ok, however shoving it into your face 20 chapters in is just so jarring and such an uncomfortable upset to the pace of the story. It's like if you're reading a novel about killing the demon king, then you spent 20 chapters on stopping some bullying not relevant, 30 chapters on a dungeon that could be 5, meaningless character interactions yes please give me 25, now why don't we make the mc's family secretly demon worshipers and the female lead's family a group of anthropomorphic hamsters, oh wait what was the main goal again, the demon king? The novel is now 100+ chapters and the author is getting tired, demon king is too far away and the hamster arc still needs to be solved, gg go next. If you don't have 600 chapters worth of effort and time to put into a novel, please don't write it as such with so many plot twists and turns before you've even properly started on the main path. Sorry bit of a rant at the end but thanks for reading, even this review could be shorter lol.

Shameless Author is here!After 65 chapters I'm finally going to review my novel. It's been a long journey for me guys. Anyway, I know that many people are dissatisfied with the old chapter. So I'm going to edit all of them, I can't edit all of them at the same time but I will edit one or two chapters a day.So please support Guys in this novel.And if you want you can send gifts to me, I mean I didn't receive any gifts from my dear viewers, so if you like you can send gifts.And if you have any questions you can ask me here. Of course, I'm not going to be spoiled anything. So, bye-bye for now.

MC with the name Lucas and a transmigration to an extra character novel.

After reading it, I felt like there was nothing new at all. Many of the plot points are inspired by other novels, which makes the novel lack personality.

Your writing quality is good, There are some grammar mistakes but I know that it will improve as time goes on.I hope that you will continue to write this novel

Too overrated. It's not worth it. Firstly, there are too many grammatical errors. Secondly, if Mc transmigrate into his trash novel, then the novel is gonna be trash anyway

It just feels like the author can’t handle what he started. And common, I don’t mind reading copy and paste but just don’t let the names from the other novels slip up.

This has great potential keep it up author.

You know once you read it. At first I thought it was but a typo but as I noticed the same mistakes again and again I realized it wasn't, and the author didn't even bother to look back and fix the mistakes.