Item: Dimensional Wanderer Starting with a Diary in One piece.
Rating: 4.8
Author: Rizki_Caturianto

Rizki_CaturiantoLv11yr

2023-12-07 09:06

It's a great One Piece fanfiction!! 👍👍 I agree with others comment that the translate/english and grammar is bad.. But the plot is great and interesting.. The MC/Evan/Ron ((this is the most fatal error for me, what MC name? Evan or Ron?)) Is make the original plot changed by write in his diary many important information.. I don't mind a harem.. But to make all the beautiful girls/women his harem is too much (just a few is enough I think).. I like the Diary System.. It make interesting change.. I think the reward which granted a different power from One Piece world (like Nojiko got character template and Tashigi got Breath Style from another world) will make MC discover about the Diary power and it will make this story not interesting for me, but the reward to increase (a little) the girls power is ok.. The reward to gift ressurection card or strong item or weapon is ok too.. I don't like MC attitude.. He's so pervert, lazy all day, and just want to make his harem bigger.. But overall, it's a good story.. Keep up the good job author san 😁👍👍😍

Dimensional Wanderer Starting with a Diary in One piece.

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