first to read first comment first review read all 20 chapters this is a good book keep it up

Why this trash of a story is being translated, I'll never know but to sum it up this is trash oc in wish fulfillment world as such its trash I don't recommend it.

I shouldn't give different powers to the girls, if I saw a person from One Piece using powers from another world I would find a way to kill that person, because obviously I would think that she is a reincarnator, and I would also think that she stole the body of this character

Another harem one piece fanfic where the relationship between him and the girls are just immediate. No form of obstacle, development or actual connection but just them immediately falling in love just because.

The idea of the novel is good but the author did a terrible job, which isn't surprising because i have yet to read a novel that's translated that makes sense, besides the one I helped in fixing, but even then I couldn't deal with that because the author did a terrible job.

the story is good but the translation is really bad 👎

very interesting! I could not stop reading until I reached the end where I experienced a great feeling of emptiness since now I have to wait for more chapters.

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The story is good but I don't like the errors in the writing, you say that the character's name is Evan but it always says Ron as his name, you say that he ate a Zoan-type fruit but it says that he uses Enel lodge-type abilities, okay, are you. You translate it doesn't matter, ok you change some things it doesn't matter, but if you are going to change them, keep them changed and don't put the translated chapters and the chapters rewritten by you in disorder or at least be a little more consistent with the name and the abilities of the protagonist .