what chapter do you mean?

each chapher, in my opinion. Randomly upper and lower cases, nondistinguisable dialogues...

I think once I've written the story I'll revise all the chapters and add more details and dialog boxes. However, I have real difficulties with grammar, so I probably have to read up on English properly first. I will then also revise the jutsus again and make the fights longer and more extensive. This is all sort of a rough draft.

I'll come back after than then. Its great for you to being open about improvement.