It showed 8+5 at first. Then you add 2 point which should make 10+5. Then he just won +2 which should show 12+5=17. Did I misinterpret the previous tables?

why would they assume that he can drown several Ironborn ship with only his "one" ship? Ironborns' home ground is seas. I dont understand how everyone easly convinced by MC who 14 y/o with only 1 year experience if you could call it... it is absurd to read.

there is a fanfic literally with a %90 similar premise. Naruto born with the soul powers instead of chakra. His twin sisters share kyuubi. Minato and Kushina lives. He abondom them so live a assassin/hunter life. I readed it months ago, maybe a year. Nice steal author.

but it activated when he was tired and feeling low. You did not show us how he "excited".

they might be but not in large amounts. Scientist doesnt even legally own their publishings. They mostly win their earnings by projects with grants.

You can do research for private companies for R&D but those wont published. Also you can be commissioned for publish an article or research for a new issue of a journal for pocket money or no money at all. Journals and indexes are monopolizing the money and researchers wont get a penny for even most influential papers of theirs. Moreover, sometimes researchers pays to the journals so their paper could be published… so no, you can’t gain investment money from academic research.

since when? He could do introdution here instead of meaningless timeskip..

thats fair

why did you change dialogue method suddenly for worse?

Fiction characters inherently different from game characters tho. It does not disturb me when a game character's int is 100 or 1000 but a fiction character is accepted as a real in that fiction. And as a reader, i let myself inverse in this fiction reality. When a decision making, sapiens-like character has a status that describes their streght, dexterity and intelligence, you would except that represent it. It doesnt right to gatekeep, its your story, therefore your rules. But as writer of it, to represent mana, you can change the status setup. You dont need secondary symboles to represent one thing that you can do directly. It is offputting. Thats what I feel and it effects my inversation to a story, which I believe I'm not the only one feeling that way. Sorry for bad english :)

MC doesnt sound like a 13 y/o. Especially highly skilled in multiple martial arts and doesn't have a social life as implied but also know many fictions... He literally just gained sentienty. Biologically, couple of years before, he shouldnt be able understand abstract concepts. Why not age him couple of years? 15-16 would be less unbelivable and more relatable...

nice chapter. I have several bad thoughts about this fiction. but MC's this matureness was very nice to read.

very hateful things...

again, surplus information.

you can write this line without "Freya, huh?" because in previous and following words, we understood it.

At the start of the chapter, you should write "3 weeks later" or make more lines that implies time passed. It was offputting in this way.

are there more? Will they act as a deus ex machine seeing that you didnt share them?

very undoubtly...

Same 😅 couldn’t last long

Yeah but the belief of that he can defeated is make it interesting in every other fiction right? You know Naruto wont be losing, you also know luffy wont be losing but it is still thrilling to watch them as if they could lose. From the start MC described as ‘invicible’, it will be a hard task to make it interesting and intriguing. And honestly, I dont believe it will be achieved here.