TestaTaichi

Where is the rest..

My fovarite wrieter in fanfic .. tank you. I whis you good healt and imagination Your fanfic is alwasy breeze the read Good development & story telling Good pace And ı want more chapter ..

But this is too slow man please don do this way 6-8 par is okay bat 10-12 is to long ..

My man this is going same direction what ı thinking .. good dark history :));)

Man confessions or somebody write dark fantsy for quality check.. You see in real life this story is real but in japan not right this year. Maybe 20 years ago okay .. sweet albahama vs.. so this is very basic storyy ahh good morning author san :)

Man we are going in 3 years hogwarts right!?

Man you are the legend some twist and fix this story is awesome 👏🏻 Supporting you all the way finish this .. go for every corner in hp and olimpus than mix them up create your masterpieces:) W

I reead this story one breath and ı see similarities .. but ı like your perspective in story .. martin/kael ;))but you need to fix (…) first diner(restarant) than family arc then love interest and dont drop kael and princess (golden armor) useless trash dont drop it you have 14 characters need development And 8 family (4 ducal , asbourne, royal ,..) I like it all but this is not finishing line ..

next chapter. refresingh fanfic, easy the read and adictive you have limitied expention with this .. but wrighting god quailty (english my 4 langue.)

Chinese translated novel is it:??