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I don't understand the good grades, it lacks realism, people lack consistency, (I'm talking about the famous duo of the shield) the explanations requested by the shields are not really explained, in fact not explained at all. and the age of the hero is not mentioned after chapter 1 oh no again it's never mentioned... a lot of info is missing, everything is skimmed over. I think it's written with the help of an AI or else the person doesn't really like the story and the bacle.

The Son of Marvel

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You are absolutely right, this story needs a more human touch and I am going to start going into more depth. I was relying to much on the AIs help. Thank you for the review, I’ll take any advice I can get to become a better writer. Have a good day