UnlimitedRage

I hope to finish the next chapter later today.

You are absolutely right, I am trying to be better. The MC is really not acting like he is in a marvel universe. This is my first time writing any coherent story, and I need to give all characters depth and relevance. Hydra would come at a threat every chance they get, and shield personnel wouldn’t take the word of kid. Thank you for your input I will use your suggestions to make a better story. Thank you and have a goo day.

Thank you and honestly I have been writing the chapters and coming up with how I would like the story to develop as I write each individual chapter. I am trying to make a better foundation and give readers longer chapters that I filled with more depth.

Thank you

This is what the current MC looks like at 15. For the suit just imagine Asgardian runes all over it. With a metallic sheen because it is technically armor.

Thank you

You are right I am trying to make the story a little more weighty and not rely on pure might. Thanos is a cuniving being I would like for him to weave a web that almost dooms the Mc. Something to push him past his limits.

All is good this is literally my first time at writing any kind of story and I appreciate anything that can make me a better writer.

True I am tryng to get better the Mc needs more life a better sense of purpose. That is what I am trying to instill in chapters 29 and beyond. Thank you for reading I know it’s just a way to pass the time. You have a great day

True a lot of humans are ten times worse then most aliens. As he goes through more battles he will probably change.