honestly, I think this would've been a lot better without the system.
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sorry about that, I should have been careful but it's my first time writing a novel with a system.🥲
Why are you sorry author you should be proud not guilty. Always cheer up 😝
Bloom07:sorry about that, I should have been careful but it's my first time writing a novel with a system.🥲
i disagree, we have many football novels without systems and they are just boring ... what can an mc do just by himself huh? if you talk about being realistic then most players need soo many years just to improve slowly from childhood ... so in that case you have to add other aspects to the novel to keep it interesting, like romance or other stuff, wich at that point football becomes secondary .
Dw about that one thing that I do good about that is he is my too reliant in the system and that is a good thing
Bloom07:sorry about that, I should have been careful but it's my first time writing a novel with a system.🥲
"The Greatest of All Time" is football with a system and it has romance, and it is not boring.
nimko:i disagree, we have many football novels without systems and they are just boring ... what can an mc do just by himself huh? if you talk about being realistic then most players need soo many years just to improve slowly from childhood ... so in that case you have to add other aspects to the novel to keep it interesting, like romance or other stuff, wich at that point football becomes secondary .
