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Narcox
NarcoxLv141yr
2023-12-20 21:03

the name of the novel should be change to My system allows me to copy Skills after all talent do not have cooldown should be a passive thing with a system like that the novel would be a lot better without it

My system allows me to copy talents

Bloom07
4.3
744 Chs

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DonGuirit
DonGuiritLv4

true, it shouldn't be called talent, active skill would be more appropriate even the freekick talent he got has a 3/day limit what kind of talent has a quantifiable limit.

11mth
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IFuckedJadeBeauty
IFuckedJadeBeautyLv13

Love you author please don't drop it And make the mc G O A T

1yr

King_Jong
King_JongLv4

Since it’s a football novel with quality writing. I have to give this a 5 stars. Get back to work I want more chapters.

1yr
Godson_Godson_4730
Godson_Godson_4730Lv4

bro unlock 🔑 the chapters bro don't be stingy now unlock them all

1yr
Sylar_in_7
Sylar_in_7Lv10

a big lack of coherence, I would have believed the story of a 15/18 year old kid but the kid is 5 years old it is unthinkable that the matech would happen like this it was a league match ^^ the author would have skipped it childhood or change the age of the child.

1yr
Lirajya_Rai
Lirajya_RaiLv1

The story is very engaging and the quality of writing is also good. The story progression is also good. Keep on writing and keep providing quality contests. I support you Author. I want more chapter.

1yr
DaoistosrKh6
DaoistosrKh6Lv4

ok first of all you said his potential is SSS and even messi and ronaldo are only SS so why tf was he still struggling against a Japanese players☠️☠️☠️, and also his system don't even help much too I don't know what was going on when you were writing this also the mc stay too long in Japan

1yr
ZilchR0
ZilchR0Lv13

Too much filler, come on make the highlight for the system.

1yr
Piggy
PiggyLv15

i get this is fiction but the author is comparing these kids to pro player? honestly losing brain cells reading this

1yr
Bored_into_sub
Bored_into_subLv4

honestly, I think this would've been a lot better without the system.

1yr
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