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HaremForLifeLv11yr
2023-08-18 14:43

I got scammed and its still a cuck book, nothing changed really. Heavy yuri and mc having fun looking at it..................................................................

Depravity to it's finest

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3.8
300 Chs

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FateScoreAuthor

My friend, thanks for your review even if it's negative, I appreciate your thoughts. From tags you can see there is still yuri there, I just removed heavy yuri. In the story I am writing removing yuri completely is too hard, so I am sorry about that and if you don't like story or its parts you can tell me mildly, for the suggestions that are helpful, I am always grateful and welcome.

1yr
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HaremForLifeLv1

So whats with [ This chapter will not have yuri] at the start of chapter 10. you wanted to change it, so what happened? Its really so hard to not make his girls have s/ ex with each other? Its this really soo important in your book? I told you that your ither tags have dark stuff, but only one have sharing. So whats the point of going with disgusting yuri? I have no idea what kind of importance to the plot yuri has, other than cuck feelings.

FateScore:My friend, thanks for your review even if it's negative, I appreciate your thoughts. From tags you can see there is still yuri there, I just removed heavy yuri. In the story I am writing removing yuri completely is too hard, so I am sorry about that and if you don't like story or its parts you can tell me mildly, for the suggestions that are helpful, I am always grateful and welcome.
1yr
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FateScoreAuthor

Sigh... I feel really sorry to have downed your mood when you liked the start, but I do not have enough time to go through all of posted chapters and the one I have already written, and as I try to change some parts, I feel like forcing myself and that wasn't my goal, further I will write as per my time and mood, taking care that grammar mistakes will be as low as is possible for me, once again I apologize, as a author it makes me really sad, that my story couldn't live upto your expectations.

HaremForLife:So whats with [ This chapter will not have yuri] at the start of chapter 10. you wanted to change it, so what happened? Its really so hard to not make his girls have s/ ex with each other? Its this really soo important in your book? I told you that your ither tags have dark stuff, but only one have sharing. So whats the point of going with disgusting yuri? I have no idea what kind of importance to the plot yuri has, other than cuck feelings.
1yr
1
HaremForLifeLv1

Like the grammar is the point here. I dont belive you dont know where yuri is in your own book though and simple fix would work fine. Whatever, have fun writing about mc who likes to share. Funny think is, he was such an alpha dude in first 9 chapters, and you turned him into a cuck who pushes his own woman (his cute mom...) into the embrace of others. Just Wow...Yeah you are right, im dissapointed. Bye.

FateScore:Sigh... I feel really sorry to have downed your mood when you liked the start, but I do not have enough time to go through all of posted chapters and the one I have already written, and as I try to change some parts, I feel like forcing myself and that wasn't my goal, further I will write as per my time and mood, taking care that grammar mistakes will be as low as is possible for me, once again I apologize, as a author it makes me really sad, that my story couldn't live upto your expectations.
1yr
2
FateScoreAuthor

Bruh that's because....There was only one women in mc's harem in first 9 chaps.... but anyway bye. Hope ya catch better reads.

HaremForLife:Like the grammar is the point here. I dont belive you dont know where yuri is in your own book though and simple fix would work fine. Whatever, have fun writing about mc who likes to share. Funny think is, he was such an alpha dude in first 9 chapters, and you turned him into a cuck who pushes his own woman (his cute mom...) into the embrace of others. Just Wow...Yeah you are right, im dissapointed. Bye.
1yr
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Navigator_RayLv4

isn't there a tag there saying yuri 🤔 y are giving it 1* then. I mean u should have known what u where getting into it's like those brain webnovel readers who comment 1* on harem novels when it is already tagged

1yr
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Daoist490051Lv11

Author should write what he wish to write. Since he clearly stated that their is yuri here yuri haters should've steered clear from it. Author you shouldn't change anything, I'm sure their is a lot of yuri lovers our there who would be disappointed if you did.

1yr
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Yuri_is_NtrLv5

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

FateScore:My friend, thanks for your review even if it's negative, I appreciate your thoughts. From tags you can see there is still yuri there, I just removed heavy yuri. In the story I am writing removing yuri completely is too hard, so I am sorry about that and if you don't like story or its parts you can tell me mildly, for the suggestions that are helpful, I am always grateful and welcome.
1yr
1
Monarch_LordLv3

I can feel what u went thro bro

HaremForLife:Like the grammar is the point here. I dont belive you dont know where yuri is in your own book though and simple fix would work fine. Whatever, have fun writing about mc who likes to share. Funny think is, he was such an alpha dude in first 9 chapters, and you turned him into a cuck who pushes his own woman (his cute mom...) into the embrace of others. Just Wow...Yeah you are right, im dissapointed. Bye.
1yr
webnovel433Lv13

oof that is not epic

HaremForLife:Like the grammar is the point here. I dont belive you dont know where yuri is in your own book though and simple fix would work fine. Whatever, have fun writing about mc who likes to share. Funny think is, he was such an alpha dude in first 9 chapters, and you turned him into a cuck who pushes his own woman (his cute mom...) into the embrace of others. Just Wow...Yeah you are right, im dissapointed. Bye.
1yr
Shinigami_sanLv4

Thanks bro.

10mth
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Rj1101Lv1

Interesting story with a kinda interesting setting. Hope this one doesn't also get abandoned due to the harassment and bullying by the pathetic self-inserting insecure cucks. Only advice to the author is to write what he wants to because you are not going to satisfy everyone, so might as well stay true to yourself. GLHF.

1yr
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o_Infinite_oLv3

So far. everything was good. Well. some people might hate Yuri and NTR but still it was written well. I hope author don't tries to force himself into removing Yuri and NTR just because of some bad reviews. Because it might ruin how story was progressing. Just imagine. He is doing with more than 5-20 people at once. and there is no Yuri? that will be pure stupidity, besides his brainwashing skill make his girls accept anything what he is doing, so those girls easily accept other girls. And he is not the kind of character who is building harem because he loves them. He is doing all this because of his objective. and he taking care of his women also because he is possessive and not because he loves them. I think this story one of the best i have read. Those who are complaining should just read tag before reading. And i will not recommend reading this novel if you are used to reading goody two shoes type MCs.

6mth
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howareyouLv4

so genderbending tag is turning a man into a woman? then would you add that "women" to harem? and with yuri tag, that "woman" will have "her way with the MC women,,,maybe some will not see yuri as netorar, but what if the soul of one of those women is a man who was genderbended??? i did not read the novel but stopped when I saw that tag, i hope to know the story if the genderbending tag to know if i could read the novel or not

1yr
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ERFANLv3

Yuri🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮now together🚫🚫🚫🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮😑🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢.......................

10mth
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SelectialsLv4

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1yr
3
Monarch_LordLv3

honestly was pretty hyped to read it after reading the title and synopsis, but the tags absolutely ruined it...

1yr
3
hereforthesegsLv4

it Just felt strange that there were so many negative reviews and most of them are complaining about... things that the author mentioned in his tags, like wtf? this story Is great, the MC Is a savage, he's mad shit Crazy, and fiiiiinally a really depraved MC, i hate when in the description they write "EXTREME SEX, I WARN YOU, IN THIS NOVEL THERE ARE SOME CRAZY FETISH, YOU THOUGHT COULDN'T EXIST" and then, it's the most boring vanilla shit i had ever read. Another thing, this author can write women, my God i hate when other authors are like "ehm She Is in her 40's but she looks 18" no She fucking don't, have you ever seen a woman? this author describes MILFs as what they are... MOMS! i don't want a "MILF" that looks like 20, i want a milf to be in her 30's 40's and looks like her Age! God... sigh, other then this, the women here are not some brainless corpse of flesh (i mean they become one After the MC brainwash them), they have emotion, they are smart (not as much as our MC tho), they are powerful and with strong and relevant background. Sorry for the long paragraph, but one last thing, here the women have diversity, they are from various etnic groups, they have different body-shape (even tho they are all sex bombs, the author trys to differentiate) different hair-style. Ok that's all, Sorry for the long paragraph, and continue this way author, don't listen to the negative comments.

1mth
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WasUp_IKnowYouLv4

I really don't know why people don't like this novel. The novel is fine for me, and I hope the author continues it with the people who support him in mind.

2mth
2
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InfamousYounMasterLv11

If only there were illustrations of the characters

7mth
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