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2023-08-18 13:08

Hi author, your book is indeed a different take from the 'cliche' concept of contract marriage. If you are participating in WPC august, I wish you the best of luck. Though your execution is less grand than your grand ideas. There are several grammatical errors, and some characters' motivations don't make sense. All in all, it's worth a read, kudos to you author!

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Thanks for the feedback will see how to improve on the area you mention.

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All I can say is wow 10/5 book so far In a world where arranged marriages dictate the course of lives, 'Bound by Contract' delves into the compelling story of Emily Kevan, a college student with dreams of her own, and Robert Rawlings, a man bound by familial expectations. Forced together by a marriage contract, they find themselves navigating a turbulent path, riddled with uncertainty and doubt. Emily's leap of faith into the unknown sets the stage for a captivating tale of love, sacrifice, and self-discovery. As Emily and Robert embark on their journey, the reader is drawn into a gripping narrative of unmet expectations and uncharted emotions. The author masterfully portrays the protagonists' internal struggles, as Emily wrestles with the constraints of her contract and Robert grapples with his own sense of duty and yearning for autonomy. The seventeen months leading up to their wedding day become a poignant portrayal of missed connections and poignant longing. The couple's communication remains limited, leaving them both in a realm of uncertainty, haunted by unanswered questions. As the narrative unfolds, 'Bound by Contract' takes readers on an emotional rollercoaster, exploring themes of freedom, fate, and the choices that shape our destinies. The question of whether Emily will choose to divorce Robert after five years of marriage and the birth of their son hangs in the balance, making this an enthralling and thought-provoking read. The author skillfully weaves a tale that leaves readers pondering the complexities of love, sacrifice, and societal expectations. 'Bound by Contract' is a captivating journey into the hearts of its characters, leaving a lasting impression on those who venture into its compelling pages."

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