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Shi_Wu
Shi_WuLv49mth
2024-07-05 04:39

unoriginal wishfullfilment ff with super op MC... its an AU and not actuall one piece as well.. crocodile had haki and awakaned logia... story feels rushed

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Roxysmo_Forever
Roxysmo_ForeverLv3

Well, it would be strange if any of the shichibukais did not have haki, the fact that they have their awakened fruit is implicit in the fact that they can turn Alabasta into a desert

Shi_Wu
Shi_WuLv4

uhh ye it whould he hella strange but he didnt have it cuz oda is best author and deff didnt f up on that.... as for awakening we just dont know but if luffy could defeat awakaned logia user at that time than it whould be very wierd as awk logia should be way more powerfull than what we saw during alabasta and impel down tho he do have ability do change things to sand but he also have ability to drain water which is more like paramecia... its just odas bad writing which caused this wierd ahh paradox where croc should be way more powerfull but if he was than luffy should be as well...

Roxysmo_Forever:Well, it would be strange if any of the shichibukais did not have haki, the fact that they have their awakened fruit is implicit in the fact that they can turn Alabasta into a desert
Kratos2785
Kratos2785Lv3

Hey man there are faults in every story on this platform and it's not like this guy is a professional writer but man he's doing the best he can.

Kratos2785
Kratos2785Lv3

It's not important for an author to see bad reviews it's important for an author to see constructive views that actually help them get better and you don't need to write a review about anything and if you were going to write this book zero stars that just sounds like you hate this time of fanfic so if you hate it just don't read it and don't leave a bad review just because you don't like it because clearly he's doing something right if he has so many good reviews

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Shi_Wu
Shi_WuLv4

main point of review is to tell if you like it or not. yes you should spend few paragraphs for usefull review but almost noone does that as its waste of time as it wont affect finnal ranking of novel cuz of ppl that just spam 5s reviews. and yes its important for author to see bad reviews as well not just 5s a reviews full of emoji spam

Kratos2785:It's not important for an author to see bad reviews it's important for an author to see constructive views that actually help them get better and you don't need to write a review about anything and if you were going to write this book zero stars that just sounds like you hate this time of fanfic so if you hate it just don't read it and don't leave a bad review just because you don't like it because clearly he's doing something right if he has so many good reviews
Shi_Wu
Shi_WuLv4

lol just checked your review... nvm me anymore i think that its pointless to have any reasonable conversation with someone like you

Kratos2785:It's not important for an author to see bad reviews it's important for an author to see constructive views that actually help them get better and you don't need to write a review about anything and if you were going to write this book zero stars that just sounds like you hate this time of fanfic so if you hate it just don't read it and don't leave a bad review just because you don't like it because clearly he's doing something right if he has so many good reviews
Kratos2785
Kratos2785Lv3

It's not useless to leave a good review telling someone that what they could do better now it is important to not see five star reviews so that the author can look at those and see what they can do better but it's not important to see two star reviews that are just hating like yours

Shi_Wu:lol just checked your review... nvm me anymore i think that its pointless to have any reasonable conversation with someone like you
Shi_Wu
Shi_WuLv4

first of all i give him 2.5 stars which is means i rated it average, 2) i never hated on his work just highlighted stuffs i dont like 3) giveing book like this 5 stars is uhhhh 5stars means that its perfect or at least near perfect, i understand that everyone have diff preferences but legit everyone on this platform is dumb and just post 5s reviews and think that 3 or below stars are ppl who hate author (you included obv)... someone should explain how rateing works to ppl like you... 2.5 is already extremly good for an ff with copy pasted Story, characters, powers and basic system which gift super or unbalanced stuffs to mc :/ ye it might be fun to read to certain extend but it dont change fact that its pretty bad unoriginal wishfullfilment ff with op mc... ofc you can destroy my "theory" by just listing good things but you didnt do that instead you wrote comment where you just say that i just hate this book (isnt rly true as i just dont care about ffs like this) and its not that i hate genre such as this as its actually my favorite one its just that this one is poorly executed

Kratos2785:It's not useless to leave a good review telling someone that what they could do better now it is important to not see five star reviews so that the author can look at those and see what they can do better but it's not important to see two star reviews that are just hating like yours
Kratos2785
Kratos2785Lv3

So you're calling all 352,000 people dumb except for you do you know how dumb that makes you sound also 2.5 is not average three is average just like house 6 is below average when on a 10 scale and seven is average in five stars doesn't mean it's perfect it means we love the book and that the writing is pretty good you seem like a very arrogant person and it also seems like someone can push your buttons pretty easily cuz in your last comment you said you were never going to reply to my comment ever again so that just shows how weak-minded you really are

Shi_Wu:first of all i give him 2.5 stars which is means i rated it average, 2) i never hated on his work just highlighted stuffs i dont like 3) giveing book like this 5 stars is uhhhh 5stars means that its perfect or at least near perfect, i understand that everyone have diff preferences but legit everyone on this platform is dumb and just post 5s reviews and think that 3 or below stars are ppl who hate author (you included obv)... someone should explain how rateing works to ppl like you... 2.5 is already extremly good for an ff with copy pasted Story, characters, powers and basic system which gift super or unbalanced stuffs to mc :/ ye it might be fun to read to certain extend but it dont change fact that its pretty bad unoriginal wishfullfilment ff with op mc... ofc you can destroy my "theory" by just listing good things but you didnt do that instead you wrote comment where you just say that i just hate this book (isnt rly true as i just dont care about ffs like this) and its not that i hate genre such as this as its actually my favorite one its just that this one is poorly executed
Shi_Wu
Shi_WuLv4

i never sayd that i wont reply duh... i just stated that this conversation is meaningless

Kratos2785:So you're calling all 352,000 people dumb except for you do you know how dumb that makes you sound also 2.5 is not average three is average just like house 6 is below average when on a 10 scale and seven is average in five stars doesn't mean it's perfect it means we love the book and that the writing is pretty good you seem like a very arrogant person and it also seems like someone can push your buttons pretty easily cuz in your last comment you said you were never going to reply to my comment ever again so that just shows how weak-minded you really are
Shi_Wu
Shi_WuLv4

"just like house 6 is below average on 10 scale"... no idea what you mean by that tbh... 1/10 average is 5.5 and 0/10 is 5... if you meant smthing else than sry but you dont use any comas or other way of spaceing text apart

Kratos2785:So you're calling all 352,000 people dumb except for you do you know how dumb that makes you sound also 2.5 is not average three is average just like house 6 is below average when on a 10 scale and seven is average in five stars doesn't mean it's perfect it means we love the book and that the writing is pretty good you seem like a very arrogant person and it also seems like someone can push your buttons pretty easily cuz in your last comment you said you were never going to reply to my comment ever again so that just shows how weak-minded you really are
Kratos2785
Kratos2785Lv3

It's a conversation is meaningless you don't participate in it you just stop talking or writing whatever

Shi_Wu:i never sayd that i wont reply duh... i just stated that this conversation is meaningless
Kratos2785
Kratos2785Lv3

I don't spend all my time perfecting my replies to you cuz my entire life does not revolve around this app and also mainly because I'm using text to speech cuz it's faster and it also seems like you're just nitpicking my reply of things you don't like instead of acknowledging the main part where you called 352,000 people dumb

Shi_Wu:"just like house 6 is below average on 10 scale"... no idea what you mean by that tbh... 1/10 average is 5.5 and 0/10 is 5... if you meant smthing else than sry but you dont use any comas or other way of spaceing text apart
Shi_Wu
Shi_WuLv4

no? ppl have meaningless conversation on normal basis... and they do lots of meaningless stuffs... if everything had some more indepth meaning than all stuffs whould lost it :/ ... just cuz you dont gain anything from it doesnt mean you shouldnt do it... furtheremore its pretty impolite to not reply to other ppls messages(in this case i reply to your comments being factually incorrect)

Kratos2785:It's a conversation is meaningless you don't participate in it you just stop talking or writing whatever
Kratos2785
Kratos2785Lv3

I will admit you got me on that one but why you keep focusing on the things I get wrong so the things I'm getting right like you calling 352,000 people wrong and calling yourself right

Shi_Wu:no? ppl have meaningless conversation on normal basis... and they do lots of meaningless stuffs... if everything had some more indepth meaning than all stuffs whould lost it :/ ... just cuz you dont gain anything from it doesnt mean you shouldnt do it... furtheremore its pretty impolite to not reply to other ppls messages(in this case i reply to your comments being factually incorrect)
Kratos2785
Kratos2785Lv3

Hey man I'm getting tired of arguing with you can we just squash this beef and go on with our lives it's getting very tiring

Shi_Wu:no? ppl have meaningless conversation on normal basis... and they do lots of meaningless stuffs... if everything had some more indepth meaning than all stuffs whould lost it :/ ... just cuz you dont gain anything from it doesnt mean you shouldnt do it... furtheremore its pretty impolite to not reply to other ppls messages(in this case i reply to your comments being factually incorrect)
Shi_Wu
Shi_WuLv4

still idk who are those 352 000 ppl...

Kratos2785:I will admit you got me on that one but why you keep focusing on the things I get wrong so the things I'm getting right like you calling 352,000 people wrong and calling yourself right
Shi_Wu
Shi_WuLv4

ig so... anyways have a nice day mate

Kratos2785:Hey man I'm getting tired of arguing with you can we just squash this beef and go on with our lives it's getting very tiring
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