Review Detail of Dragon_Worrier in I have AI Planet and Handsomeness in the Fantasy Apocalypse

you know your writing is good but the way you write I feel tired sometimes while reading. You put too much emphasis on words which is good but you do it too much . Please make it simple like when characters are talking to each other it will make it more realistic and simple to read . Put the different words when needed or when you like it will make it more enjoyable. BTW your story is good!