Dragon_Worrier

Hey can you plz create a discord channel ?

Hey author this line  "on the name of the motherland of Aris." is grammatically awkward and redundant . plz fix this ! Also there several such paragraph and sentences that are also grammatically incorrect or do not make sense, Please look into it and fix them. Also, the side characters in this novel feel like puppets. Their interactions feel awkward and cringe worthy, and they don't feel like real people. Please try to improve them in future chapters . I like your novel so please try to improve this things and it will make this novel more interesting and feel good to read. Also a small advice : The interaction between characters and the interaction of those characters with the plot of the story are what make a story great. If you can improve these, then this novel will feel great to read . Also thank you for your hard work and this is a great novel .

Leonal ' the GOAT 🐐' Messi

why Blue star why not Earth?

This is the best story I have ever read in this god forsaken app! I mean everything is perfect the pacing of the story , quality of writing, world building , side characters who feel like real people rather than dolls and the amount of character development this story has... damn! All i want to say is keep going author i will support you however i can. When i get a job I will invest in this story and in you author . Until than all the best!

Is there only 144 chapters or there is more plz tell author i want to read more.

Plz correct the grammar in your writing .

What's with the Chicken bro?

*no your majesty

Man he is a reincarnated person from earth and his occupation was a hunter. He is beyond mature in this time and on top of it he spent 14 years in seclusion, practicing , improving his sword art which by the way he should not only be mature but also wise. So how f**k he has a 14 year old brain. Author plz think deeply before commenting . Also great novel I am enjoying just needs a slight improvement in writing and story line/plot.