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2024-10-07 12:29

In writing comedy is not easy to pull off. The author clearly has this aspect mastered. My only gripe is how he is doing wandless magic, then just combined magic. Wands are a big part of Harry potter lore and while wandless magic for relatively simple stuff is possible for powerful wizards like Dumbles and voldy, they still rely on their wands. So whenever any fanfics put in their mc doing wandless magic while still in their school days ( i remember there was a next level fic where the mc was four or five years old and wandlessly did patronous charm. lol) it just breaks the immersion for me, being a huge potterhead and all. Still excluding that the story is funny.

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Knight_WolfAuthor

Thanks for the first two lines😁 Regarding wands, he will use one later on.... I tried to keep the magic he is using relatively simple, though I did get overboard at times😅. But a reason will be there later in the book.... which will make half- no, most of my readers wanna kill me but nonetheless, there shall be wands later on🫡

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