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Misifus_7w7
Misifus_7w7Lv31yr
2023-08-10 06:56

I'm on chapter 2 and I'm quitting, the concept is great but everything else after reading it is just a NO for me, Gilgamesh's personality, narcissistic and arrogant is nowhere to be found, he's just a normal guy with the powers of the King of Uruk and King of Heroes, GILGAMESH.

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KangTL
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Blast_Niro
Blast_NiroLv4

Do you know how I write in English? Cause the only reply you do is with gifs and it's pretty annoying, especially when your work is this bad and you don't want to at least defend it or explain why it's this bad.

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KangTL
KangTLAuthor

I welcome constructive criticism and suggestions, but giving a one star rating just because it didn't meet your expectations and misunderstood the intention and essence of this fanfic? Lol, I won't waste my energy explaining that, the synopsis clearly states what you can expect from this fanfic.

Blast_Niro:Do you know how I write in English? Cause the only reply you do is with gifs and it's pretty annoying, especially when your work is this bad and you don't want to at least defend it or explain why it's this bad.
KangTL
KangTLAuthor

Read this synopsis, does this synopsis explain about the OG Gilgamesh and his narcissistic and arrogant personality? Of course, if you read the synopsis properly, you will know that this fanfic is not at all about OG Gilgamesh acting narcissistic and arrogant."An empty soul without a name, which had reached the end of its life, lamented and awakened the all-seeing observer.With the intervention of the all-seeing observer, the empty soul that had reached the end of its life returned to the world as the King of Heroes, Gilgamesh. The golden king who watches over everything, marking the era of humanity.Witness the unexpected changes brought forth by this nameless empty soul within the vessel of the mightiest hero, and become a star that illuminates humanity with its uniqueness.---This is not a story of the nameless soul manipulating a vessel to become his own, this is a story of the nameless soul's journey of self-discovery and seeing the world through the eyes of the King of Heroes and making his own mark on the world, not as King of Heroes Gilgamesh, but as....."

Blast_Niro
Blast_NiroLv4

Yeah, well obviously you didn't do a good job at showing that, since most readers are still confused. And if all we needed was the synopses to enjoy a story and completely understand it then most authors here would actually be considered good.

KangTL:Read this synopsis, does this synopsis explain about the OG Gilgamesh and his narcissistic and arrogant personality? Of course, if you read the synopsis properly, you will know that this fanfic is not at all about OG Gilgamesh acting narcissistic and arrogant."An empty soul without a name, which had reached the end of its life, lamented and awakened the all-seeing observer.With the intervention of the all-seeing observer, the empty soul that had reached the end of its life returned to the world as the King of Heroes, Gilgamesh. The golden king who watches over everything, marking the era of humanity.Witness the unexpected changes brought forth by this nameless empty soul within the vessel of the mightiest hero, and become a star that illuminates humanity with its uniqueness.---This is not a story of the nameless soul manipulating a vessel to become his own, this is a story of the nameless soul's journey of self-discovery and seeing the world through the eyes of the King of Heroes and making his own mark on the world, not as King of Heroes Gilgamesh, but as....."
Martial_Saint
Martial_SaintLv4

Yeah, i felt so uncomfortable when i read this novel, 2 chapters and i quit

Loki_Laufeyson_616
Loki_Laufeyson_616Lv1

No sean unos imbesiles en la descrición dejaba muy en claro que el mc no era gilgamesh haci que seria ilogico que solo porque esta en el cuerpo de gilgamesh y sea reconocido como tal el deba actuar como el ademas el mc esta en una etapa de autodescubrimiento el tiene los instintos y algo de recuerdos de gilgamesh pero mc no es gilgamesh y si no me equivoco el verdadero gilgamesh esta dentro del mc mirando lo que hace el mc en si son dos entidades distintas haci que lo lamento por ti si qurias un gilgamesh psicotico que llena de agujeros a quien lo ofende mi unicó queja es que no se entiende bien los dialogos no se quien dice que cosa nose si soy el unico con ese problema ya que yo lo tradusco a español

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