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hero4hire
hero4hireLv111yr
2023-08-26 01:41

3.5/5 Writing is excellent but the story is extremely slowpaced for my taste, alot of MC's theatric while entertaining are cartoonish and have no logical explaination to them. Its also kinda silly that mc can only obtain exp during mission evaluation and every other fame and exp gathered between missions goes to waste. Unless author is planning to write thousand chapter fanfic this story is going nowhere with this level of increase in mc power or story development. Good enough for timepass read but not something to be invested because it'll definitely ends in disappointment.

DC: Phantom Thief Kid

Sothisq
4.5
222 Chs

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Sothisq
SothisqAuthor

like i said, if you're not into OP MC don't read this

1yr
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hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

Not into OP mc tbh, but this one is too slow plotwise and it just doesnt work for fanfic genre. I'd enjoyed it immsensely if you were gonna write hundrend if not thousands chapter of this story but we both know thats not going to happen, I've never seen original ff that long. The most likely scenerio is, its gonna end in after a few of his heists without the story getting anywhere. Well, if you prove me wrong, i'll gladly remove this comment and leave a 5 star glowing recommendation with a month worth of powerstones.

Sothisq:like i said, if you're not into OP MC don't read this
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Josden
JosdenLv13

After all, fanfic characters don't have to be overpowered to make the story interesting. He's the phantom thief kid, it's also good that he's more "human"

1yr
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hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

well its not bad if you read it as slice of life with some adventure in between, I gave it 3.6 rating but WN don't show fraction so it came up 3 star here.

Josden:After all, fanfic characters don't have to be overpowered to make the story interesting. He's the phantom thief kid, it's also good that he's more "human"
1yr
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Josden
JosdenLv13

And then given the development of the story it will end up becoming op, only it will take some time. I find all the police investigations really cool and I hope he doesn't get caught by the bat family

hero4hire:well its not bad if you read it as slice of life with some adventure in between, I gave it 3.6 rating but WN don't show fraction so it came up 3 star here.
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Unstable_One
Unstable_OneLv5

Are you serious? A story about Phantom Kid Kaito is too cartoonish? The whole idea of a phantom theif is silly, let alone the fact that both Phantom Thief Kaito, and to an extent, batman, are extremely cartoonish in the first place.As for pace? Personally, I think it's perfect. I hate how fast many of the stories have gotten, giving you little attachment to anyone or anything. I just wish more time was spent building up the MC's relationships (not just romantic, though that would be good too).

1yr
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Juhiko
JuhikoLv6

I don't see the op mc you keep saying

1yr
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Other Reviews
Sothisq
SothisqAuthor

I hope you enjoy it!

1yr

Tim_QQQ
Tim_QQQLv1

each theft takes about 30 chapters, most of which is just filler nonsense from background characters. you hardly get any MC POV. the story simply hasn't gone anywhere, events that take place over a few days are written about for 30-40 chapters, so you basically end where mc started, just with a few stolen goods that he returns.

1yr
Marvin_Besey
Marvin_BeseyLv5

Please finish this one please 🙏. Last one left me hanging.

1yr
KissShot6
KissShot6Lv14

i like it so far.. tbh i don't really like "system'" but considering the danger in the DC universe, i don't really mind it.. also i like how the author make the system doesnt give MC task, it make me feel the system' just a Character sheet that only show the character's stat, and shop..

1yr
M_Static
M_StaticLv4

AT Can you start moving the plot? its 137 ch. but you just gives us illusion that smthing is happening. Are if you continue in the same way how many ch will be there overall if you ever try finish this ff. Think about. 600?900? AT got few good moments, but number of chapterPace slower than a snail. Not character development in any way. Well mc got 2 "upgrades" but they are Meh. The ratio of the number of chapters to good moments is negligible. plot, development, climax, denouement. This is the standard structure of any arc of any fanfic, and overall structure of any book or perfomance. But the plot and development suck, the climax - there is ...almost none or very very faded and uninteresting, we seem to be happy for the MC that everything worked out for him, but it’s all one big MEH!!!!

1yr
Falsic
FalsicLv15

This is a fun read. The problem stems from the 'nerfing' of Batman and Robin's intelligence to give the MC a chance. Granted, without that, there would be no story, so... yeah... I think this would work better if it was just a Batman-centric story instead of a Justice League story. That way, the bat family's perspectives and experience could align closer to the the MC's level. If inconsistent Bat Family intelligence and capability bothers you, this may not be for you.

1yr
Icy881
Icy881Lv5

the story isn't that great since it uses the same format Chinese novels use when they turn mobs into the audience to praise or criticize either the MC or other people involved such as the police or the Bat-family and it took 160 plus chapters for the MC to get an upgrade that puts him on the same level as Robin maybe? I guess the author is trying to bring Detective Conan style of Phantom Thief Kid in DC cause he has turned some of DC characters into something else like Gorden into a maniac who only wants Mc's head on a pike. :D but yeah, the pace is slow and MC is weak with a solid plot armor at least til chapter 163 which I have read, maybe it will change soon since his next opponent is probably Batman.

1yr
Alyvia_Vaughan
Alyvia_VaughanLv1

In love with this book and wondering does anyone know if theres more fics like this? Im just very interested in the storyline premise qnd the sheer amazement at how clever the mc is.

1yr
FallenAngelN
FallenAngelNLv11

Entertaining, but also a failure. The point of the plot is to use his system to rob while also putting on a show to get points. Then use those points to get stronger to survive the hell that is DC. Simple right? 100 chapters in, and 5 robberies later, and what does the MC have? A powerful buzzsaw...superhuman reaction, but it's only for a few seconds...Skin that is 10% more resistant to the elements... I wish I was joking. Entertaining story, but it goes nowhere, and promises otherwise. 1-Star for balance. I'd normally give about 3 and a half stars.

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