AT Can you start moving the plot? its 137 ch. but you just gives us illusion that smthing is happening. Are if you continue in the same way how many ch will be there overall if you ever try finish this ff. Think about. 600?900? AT got few good moments, but number of chapterPace slower than a snail. Not character development in any way. Well mc got 2 "upgrades" but they are Meh. The ratio of the number of chapters to good moments is negligible. plot, development, climax, denouement. This is the standard structure of any arc of any fanfic, and overall structure of any book or perfomance. But the plot and development suck, the climax - there is ...almost none or very very faded and uninteresting, we seem to be happy for the MC that everything worked out for him, but it’s all one big MEH!!!!
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