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Emu_Lator
Emu_LatorLv13mth
2024-12-11 14:30

Was funny at first since the mc sounds delusional. But that works if the mc is doing it deliberately. Like some 4th wall knowledge of a reincarnator. But the way this was set up was mc only knows his back story and very much hollow in everything else. His personality doesnt hold up beyond his otherworldy mutterings. Also a main character being in hp yet not be able to use their magic, kinda makes the whole thing pointless

Harry Potter Natural

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106 Chs

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maskhara
maskharaLv13

story is well written and the characters work even if they arent at all loyal to the source in some cases... what bothers me isnt a critique of the content but rather the concept.... hes self aware and has experiance meta gaming but is strangely not absorbing or adapting to the setting.... obviously this allows the gag to keep functioning but ultimately it goes against what he is as a metagaming dnd character to not even try to break the system and absorb power from the hp system

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eternalice
eternaliceLv5

The story is quite funny but the D&D wizard is out of place in HP world especially if they can’t cast spells normally like other people in the story setting. D&D character build may be interesting in D&D but in real world (or any other fantasy world) it’s unlikely that people (or characters) behave as such. Moreover the grammar and updates are something to be improved upon. But all is not bad, the main character is fun and his D&D references and other characters reactions to it are quite entertaining.

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CruelReality
CruelRealityLv4

Really well written in terms of diplogue and plot. I highly suggest giving this a try. However, the issue for me is that I dislike the premise that he can only use D&D magic. Also, as someone not very familiar with D&D upon looking into the magic system I utterly despise how it functions. Thus, I will say this is a great story just not to my own taste. 7.2/10, solid and worth trying.

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RandomWeb
RandomWebLv4

Amazing story, and has been an extreme fun read for me. It also has a lot of elements of humor which I enjoy. Definitely recommend reading it!

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craze_8093
craze_8093Lv15

hilariously good, right amount of humor and character Insanity

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Draconic_Games
Draconic_GamesLv14

Reveal spoiler

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Blutmond
BlutmondLv3

Good

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Death_Kidd_29
Death_Kidd_29Lv15

I got a headache from reading this I mean it's cool and all but I'm not a dungeon and dragon player so it's confusing as f***but that's on me for not knowing about dungeons and dragons to understand the book or to like it

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DaoistyhmT6N
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one of the funniest fanfic i have ever read while not sacrificing the story, dialogue or characters. the choices and dialogue aren't forced and are still really funny and interesting. recommend

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ErrorLynx
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Really good fanfic. Well-written and the humor is right in my alley. Please don't drop.

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