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R0berto
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2023-11-13 09:24

It is translated. Writing quality is passable considering the level of the page. Updates are constant and may change in the future. The characters leave a lot to be desired since we have no information about anything except the most basic until chapter 13. The development of the story is very slow and with no development. The world is blank, only 3 factions have been shown, the rest are blank. Good idea but with too many things wasted on the protagonist he has not done anything to improve his life of all the things you have to earn money you draw drawings.That is the most wasted 16 years that is seen and shows none of the common or basic knowledge of the previous life. Good idea but it makes you a little angry at all the lost potential. Good luck

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Dungeo
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Thanks fpr taking the time to give feed back bro. Sorry the story wasn't to your liking ill try to improve. I wish you luck with your future readings

The_man_The_myth
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Dungeo:Thanks fpr taking the time to give feed back bro. Sorry the story wasn't to your liking ill try to improve. I wish you luck with your future readings
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The_man_The_myth:
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IgnisPrimus
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Is the story translated or is your review translated?

R0berto
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IgnisPrimus:Is the story translated or is your review translated?
PizzaConsumer2648
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Potential, I sense.

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