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2023-09-24 22:28

man what happened from chi 1-9 i can't find it

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Rarely has a story disappointed me as much as this fanfic, I will explain briefly, the MC has the power to destroy a planet with pure force and can also do it with illusions (he can control anyone he wants), acquires a human form of his own and also makes one for his 9 brothers, Up to that point the plot was just boring since the story was literally a travel log of the MC who is a yandere (negative point in my opinion, it's disgusting), everything was going well until they decide to venture into the human world, at that point everything goes downhill and as the chapters progress everything gets worse at a faster rate. The MC decides to literally curse Harashima when he is a child for something he hasn't done yet, the MC showed his spiteful and childish side, then not wanting to change the future plot he decides that his brothers must be sealed in humans just like in canon, He is the strongest person in his world and although he despises Hiruzen and his actions he decides not to change anything which makes him even more despicable than Hiruzen since he has the power to act but decides do nothing. Why does the MC decide that? because although he has enough power and enough skills so that no one bothers him, he still decides to maintain the canon so as not to derail the future plot... reading the last 20 chapters I felt like the author time and again ruined the plot with his lack of creativity, he only thought of making a mega powerful MC who only knows how to hide... This fanfic is a disappointment and I don't recommend reading it since if you want to read the Naruto canon you can look for the original since it will be the same.

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