Rin is not from the uchiha clan.

Intresting concept, has huge scope. Worth a read. Hopefully wont be dropped. ................. .................................... .

i'm going to state why i don't like this ff. you can read it if you wish to verify.one, rin isn't from the uchiha clan.two, making the entire village know that you have magnet release is just stupid. the hokage, clan, danzo. i mean, why? anyways, i'm gonna put this book on hold in chapter 9. I'll be back to see how it goes. It has great potential of going on Hiatus

So far, the story is quite good.......... Long chapters, few grammatical mistakes, and cool powers. Hope you will continue to write this fanfic.........

"With a SYSTEM" story.

Been looking for hyuga clan fic nice

I saw alot of people criticizing about student named Rin, Mc showing off to everyone etc... and i dismissed their concern thinking author must have a plan or it was a simple misunderstanding. But NO! while author claim Rin uchiha is different from Rin Nahara, we never see the other one while that uchiha girl is in the same class as obito/kakashi. MC goes on crazy rant about quantum to cosmic theories as soon as he found out he have Electromagnetic powers like he could do all that without theoretical knowleldge or varifying if his power is real EMF or simple kekei gankai like 3rd kazekage. Most of all the story feel very lacking, like a draft of an unfinsihed book with major parts missing. Mc does alot of as_pull without real explaination or logic. We just have to acccept and move on or the story would stop making any sense.

Fuh! Although he sounds op, the author balance his progression quite well! I love the story! Give it a try! It’s very good! Ps, uchiha rin is not obito’s rin!!

Grammar isn’t the best but that’s not a problem for me and the only thing i dislike about this story was the main character and his personality.