Rin is not from the uchiha clan.

Intresting concept, has huge scope. Worth a read. Hopefully wont be dropped. ................. .................................... .

So far, the story is quite good.......... Long chapters, few grammatical mistakes, and cool powers. Hope you will continue to write this fanfic.........

"With a SYSTEM" story.

Stupid MC. With Danzo lurking around, you choose to expose your double bloodline limits in the academy. You don't have enough strength to protect yourself.

Been looking for hyuga clan fic nice

I saw alot of people criticizing about student named Rin, Mc showing off to everyone etc... and i dismissed their concern thinking author must have a plan or it was a simple misunderstanding. But NO! while author claim Rin uchiha is different from Rin Nahara, we never see the other one while that uchiha girl is in the same class as obito/kakashi. MC goes on crazy rant about quantum to cosmic theories as soon as he found out he have Electromagnetic powers like he could do all that without theoretical knowleldge or varifying if his power is real EMF or simple kekei gankai like 3rd kazekage. Most of all the story feel very lacking, like a draft of an unfinsihed book with major parts missing. Mc does alot of as_pull without real explaination or logic. We just have to acccept and move on or the story would stop making any sense.

Fuh! Although he sounds op, the author balance his progression quite well! I love the story! Give it a try! It’s very good! Ps, uchiha rin is not obito’s rin!!

Grammar isn’t the best but that’s not a problem for me and the only thing i dislike about this story was the main character and his personality.