webnovel
wormmusimsenja
wormmusimsenjaLv41yr
2023-12-01 13:59

I've been hoping for a good continuation of the story. So far, it's been quite good, although Lucas hasn't fully utilized his abilities, which I understand since it's still in the early stages. My suggestion is that Lucas should pay more attention to his people because, in my opinion, he's underutilizing them. Also, regarding his original world, I believe you could explore Lucas's story in his original world, such as learning to create something, finding a blueprint, or depicting Lucas's life back then.(translitor)

Liked by 4 people

LIKE
Replies1
GreenBlue17
GreenBlue17Author

Thanks for your suggestions.

Other Reviews
Related Stories