Item: Lannister's Sin of Pride
Rating: 2.8
Author: CILinkz

CILinkzLv21yr

2023-08-17 22:46

this is less Escanor and more generic MC with his name. im not too sure Author knows what pride is but its not really portraited here. its also more tell than show, the story telling is only skin deep, we dont really see anything original compared to canon.

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