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Naveen_Aggarwal_6572
Naveen_Aggarwal_6572Lv31yr
2023-08-13 00:48

I think the character of eskanor has not been taken at all as in these chapters MC is not showing pride he is potrayed as a scheming & shrued character whereas as it was beneth escanor to make these kinds of backstabbing plans or lying to anybody as according to him only weak men needs these kinds of plan and his pride would'nt allow it.

Lannister's Sin of Pride

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30 Chs

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Kariem
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You type this like the MC didn't wish to not have the character of Escanor he only wished for the power of Escanor and the author also mentioned that the MC only did that because he was bored and not because he needed to scheme

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Seems good but we all know it will be dropped in a weak if that

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AllenCross
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The update speed and quality are excellent, but it's just boring, the character is one-on-one like in other fan fiction about all-powerful and all-knowing main characters who do not experience the resistance of the world. In the beginning it was just super, the story was able to catch, interest, but after predictable events in the family of L. Everything turned into banality. At this point in history there is no highlight. So for now, only if there is nothing to read at all.

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MonkeyOfAle
MonkeyOfAleLv4

The gimmick here, like in this author's other currently updating fic, is that the main character has an extremely nerfed ability that he does not use and that his mother dies no matter what.

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Mastarius
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this fanfic covers only the boring portions and from others chatacters pov the mc is not the main focus so with this little chapters theres nothing interesting going on maybe if this fanfic reaches the chinese numbers of 1000 chapters maybe it will get to the good stuff then but who knows if author can go 50 before drop Writing Quality 4 Stability of Updates 2 Story Development 2 Character Design 3 World Background 4

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Dolbysminion
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I'm liking this fan fiction that will focus on the lannisters seeing how the most hated family in my opinion baring the Freys grew up. I hope this grows and does not drop the potential is there keep up the good work.

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Baldysalino
BaldysalinoLv13

Its meh.

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Totallylazytobones
TotallylazytobonesLv4

you mother funker made me stay up till 2 am to read this whole thing great job man well written

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Holman
HolmanLv12

a very pleasant surprise to say the least, I was skeptical at first when I read the summary, but now (after reading 13 chapters) I can say this looks really good. and the author seems to know what he's doing. we need more updates.

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