Seems good but we all know it will be dropped in a weak if that

I think the character of eskanor has not been taken at all as in these chapters MC is not showing pride he is potrayed as a scheming & shrued character whereas as it was beneth escanor to make these kinds of backstabbing plans or lying to anybody as according to him only weak men needs these kinds of plan and his pride would'nt allow it.

The gimmick here, like in this author's other currently updating fic, is that the main character has an extremely nerfed ability that he does not use and that his mother dies no matter what.

this fanfic covers only the boring portions and from others chatacters pov the mc is not the main focus so with this little chapters theres nothing interesting going on maybe if this fanfic reaches the chinese numbers of 1000 chapters maybe it will get to the good stuff then but who knows if author can go 50 before drop Writing Quality 4 Stability of Updates 2 Story Development 2 Character Design 3 World Background 4

I'm liking this fan fiction that will focus on the lannisters seeing how the most hated family in my opinion baring the Freys grew up. I hope this grows and does not drop the potential is there keep up the good work.

Its meh.

you mother funker made me stay up till 2 am to read this whole thing great job man well written

a very pleasant surprise to say the least, I was skeptical at first when I read the summary, but now (after reading 13 chapters) I can say this looks really good. and the author seems to know what he's doing. we need more updates.