The story is logically sound yet magically immersive and draws you in from the first chapter, even with the info dumps(which are totally my thing btw, but some people might not be fond of it... It's world building 101, come on). The language is easy to follow, yet expressive and emotive. The scenic descriptions pull you into the world. It's a bit slow at first, but it feels like a marathon worth running.

This, is honestly really great. But I'll still go through the motions. Writing quality; I didn't see any grammatical errors, though that doesn't mean much if the story or world-building is garbage. The actions and reactions of the characters and the world around them are written in quite a pleasant way. Story development; The story seems to be building up well, a vampire threat appearantly, and I can't wait for some time shenanigens. Character design; Leonardo decaprio was done pretty well, though you should remember that this is semi-regressor story. The girl I presume to be his original wife is... I'm honestly not sure about her, she appearantly has some talent, which at least makes her, not, useless. If she were to get a bit to big for her britches, though, I'm sure to reccomend ways to mess with her. But if there were one complaint, the mc is pretty much just 'Generic strong-willed kid but with magical knowledge and a weird connection to a kid a year or two younger than him.' World background; This, this is great, and I'm going to only be talking about the magic system here, talk about what I know and all. The magic system has 9 sections, not elements, 'Sections'. Time, space, elements, mind, soul, ect. Now, I'm not that certain as to how it will be used yet, but I know a common pit fall; 'This element does that, and since the mage is stronger, there's more element!' Make sure to mix the sections, okay? Not just fire. But fire and mind, to make a fire that seems perfectly safe, and even comfortable, and then mix in some soul, so that the flame can burn the soul. Voila, you made a three section spell, let's call it 'Ensnaring soul fire'. Individual stars- Writing quality; 5* Stability of updates; 5* (Don't matter anyways) Story development; 4* (Due to it being slow paced at the moment) Character design; 4* (Due to there not being enough characterization) World background; 5* (You can really see that this was probably written before hand, and then adapted into a novel.) Conclusion; I'll be honest, since you won't pick up the other paths in detail, after you finish or get burnt-out by this novel, write something about another character in another time with a different path. It'd be a waste if this world only had one novel too be a door to it. PS; If anything important happens after (Chapter 12), I'm going to change this review to reflect it.

I enjoyed reading this story. The author's writing quality is very good and I had to say it's an interesting story to pick. I could connect with characters well and I could feel their emotions, especially in the initial chapters. I also want to say one thing, that I felt the choice of words were a little complicated in the initial chapters, but later it got good. Overall it's a nice story worth a read and I totally recommend it.

I greatly enjoyed the writing and narrative of the story. Every detail was vivid, and I could feel the emotions and atmosphere of the story. However, the beginning and pacing of the story felt somewhat slow to me. It took around 5-6 chapters before the main character finally reincarnated, which took some time. Overall, this novel is still a great work, and I highly recommend it for fans of the fantasy genre.

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The story follows a certain flow of events that suck you in to the plot and world itself. there is a nice character progression and development along with the power gain through logical means

Great read, this gave me some sort of vibes from a series I used to watch that just straights up kills a character they just introduced. I saw quite a bit of information dumps and although I'm fine with that, I think the readers could be more immersed into the world more if it was more detailed and more explained. Overall, it was a great read!

he story is great, my only complaint is the information dump at some point. I suggest removing it and slowly revealing it as the character reaches that level. Other than that a great overall read.

I love everything about this novel. The character names areso good that it makes one easy to remember. The world background is also good. Keep it up

This is my first time reading a book about reincarnation, this got me hooked up. I guess I will stick around.