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kurotsuki007
kurotsuki007Lv131yr
2023-11-27 05:45

I have this book a good try before I dropped it. I finished one full arc “world” but I don’t see myself reading further. The mc can get lovers literally by existing, there is no build up of a connection just “hi I’m mc and you are my lover now”. It might be a bit more than that but it rarely takes more than a a chapter for a harem member to join the harem. Then there are the 18+ scenes. They are very lackluster and can be summed up as “*pant * *pant * *pant * *slurp**slurp**slurp * “Oh yes ~ MC I’m coming””. There is very little variation to the scenes and they are very vanilla for a gender bender yuri. They story itself isn’t anything new, but it doesn’t need to be. We read cliche system novels for a reason.

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Yuri_lover12
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ok i love this and it fun keep up the good work and if you wanna continue why not use the world like overlord RWBY arknights etc (just an idea no need to take it this story is yours)

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